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*{{o}} I do agree with KoH actually, and as you already mention above, Rhododendrites, the object is not really wowing (old/historic in the States it not surely not what we'd consider old/historic in Europe). I believe that I'd liked to see more of the bay on the right. With this composition both the bay and the building are fighting for attention. There is also visible green CA, that should be removed --[[User:Poco_a_poco|Poc]][[User Talk:Poco_a_poco|o<sup>2</sup>]] 17:54, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
*{{o}} I do agree with KoH actually, and as you already mention above, Rhododendrites, the object is not really wowing (old/historic in the States it not surely not what we'd consider old/historic in Europe). I believe that I'd liked to see more of the bay on the right. With this composition both the bay and the building are fighting for attention. There is also visible green CA, that should be removed --[[User:Poco_a_poco|Poc]][[User Talk:Poco_a_poco|o<sup>2</sup>]] 17:54, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
*{{o}} as per comments above. [[User:Yann|Yann]] ([[User talk:Yann|<span class="signature-talk">{{int:Talkpagelinktext}}</span>]]) 21:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
*{{o}} as per comments above. [[User:Yann|Yann]] ([[User talk:Yann|<span class="signature-talk">{{int:Talkpagelinktext}}</span>]]) 21:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
*{{o}} composition. [[User:Saffron Blaze|Saffron Blaze]] ([[User talk:Saffron Blaze|<span class="signature-talk">{{int:Talkpagelinktext}}</span>]]) 00:14, 23 September 2017 (UTC)

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Tiburon Railroad & Ferry Depot Museum in Shoreline Park in Tiburon, California, on San Francisco Bay, with city skyline in the distance.
I can support either crop but I think the new one is slightly better. PumpkinSky talk 02:17, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
That would be better, yes. It's still a little bit underexposed (the whites should be close to 255 without exceeding it), and the technical issues mentioned by Julian should be fixed. -- King of 04:22, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Support -- Johann Jaritz (talk) 02:09, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Support contingent on a few improvements. I do mostly like the composition (the sailboat is a small but excellent touch) but as KoH says, the grass near the bottom could be cropped out without cutting into the bottom of the closest bollard... content-aware fill may do a decent job of cloning it out without cropping. Also, I would run it through lens profile corrections to remove color fringing, vignetting, and minor distortion. –Juliancolton | Talk 02:14, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Juliancolton and King of Hearts: It's an Olympus MFT camera, so lens corrections are built into the raw file (discovered this when trying to figure out where the profile for it was in Lightroom). That said, I've gone in and done some manual defringing. Also did a bit of a perspective adjustment to address the distortion issue you mentioned. That necessitated a bit different crop. Brightened a little bit, and applied a minor vignetting correction. The result is here (again, I've reverted to the original for FPC purposes, but will change if there's a broad sense this new version is an improvement). Thanks for your feedback. — Rhododendrites talk06:13, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oh, I didn't know that! You learn something new every day. :) Yes, I think the linked revision is notably improved. Hopefully enough other participants chime in to endorse making that the live version. –Juliancolton | Talk 13:44, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]