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==GA Review==
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| result = Passed. Well done {{u|Krisgabwoosh}}, I would suggest looking for a fact to nominate to [[Template talk:Did you know|DYK]]. Good article reviews are not a quid pro quo but if you like it would be helpful to review one or two [[Wikipedia:Good article nominations|Good article nominations]]. Their is currently [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/GAN Backlog Drives/August 2023|a drive to reduce the backlog]].--[[User:Llewee|Llewee]] ([[User talk:Llewee|talk]]) 16:24, 19 August 2023 (UTC)}}
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*:One source does mention that she is married with three kids. I'm hesitant to dedicate a whole section to just that, though; I'm generally not a fan of [[Teresa Leger Fernandez#Personal life|one-sentence sections]]. I tend to go by [[Wikipedia:Women in Red]]'s suggestion not to define women by their relationships (See: [[WP:NOTBYRELATION]]). [[User:Krisgabwoosh|Krisgabwoosh]] ([[User talk:Krisgabwoosh|talk]]) 07:07, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
*Once this new information has been added the lead should be rewritten to include some references to it.
Hi {{u|Krisgabwoosh}}, I will do some more checks on the article this evening. --[[User:Llewee|Llewee]] ([[User talk:Llewee|talk]]) 10:47, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
=== Sources ===
*I can't read Spanish. Many of the sources are PDF's which I can see her name and photograph in and am willing to take their content on trust.
*[7] is a page on blogspot. However, the writer's bio implies that he is a established journalist. If that is true the source can be kept per [[WP:BLOGS]].
*:I'd also note that in this case, the article was published by a reputable source (''[[Página Siete]]'') but the original link is long dead. I figured a re-post by the original writer was preferable than no link at all. [[User:Krisgabwoosh|Krisgabwoosh]] ([[User talk:Krisgabwoosh|talk]]) 22:09, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
*" reflecting the MAS's rigid internal hierarchy, which often discouraged legislators from challenging the party line." you might want to find a different source for this statement as it seems to be based on her own words in [7].
*:In the absence of a more concrete source on this{{snd}}there are myriad examples but I couldn't find anything straight forward enough for my liking{{snd}}I've elected to add an aside clarifying that the sentence is from ''her'' perspective. Let me know if that's ok from your viewpoint; I'll see then if I need to look more thoroughly or consider rewording. [[User:Krisgabwoosh|Krisgabwoosh]] ([[User talk:Krisgabwoosh|talk]]) 19:02, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
* A few other spot checks suggested no issues.
===Copyright===
* File:Carmen García Mamani (Official Photo, 2012) Chamber of Senators of Bolivia.jpg - is confirmed to have a appropiate licence
* I have put the article through an earwig copyvio check ([https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Carmen+Garc%C3%ADa+%28politician%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Link here]) which presented no issues.
:'''[[Wikipedia:Good article nominations|GA]] review''' (see [[Wikipedia:Good article criteria|here]] for what the criteria are, and [[Wikipedia:What the Good article criteria are not|here]] for what they are not)
#It is '''reasonably well written'''.
#:a ''(prose, spelling, and grammar)'': {{GAList/check|Y}} b ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] for [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section|lead]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout|layout]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch|word choice]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Writing about fiction|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Embedded lists|lists]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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#It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''.
#:a ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout#Notes and references|reference section]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}} b ''(inline citations to [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources|reliable sources]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}} c ''([[Wikipedia:No original research|OR]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}} d ''([[Wikipedia:Copyrights|copyvio]] and [[Wikipedia:Plagiarism|plagiarism]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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#It is '''broad in its coverage'''.
#:a ''([[WP:Out of scope|major aspects]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}} b ''([[Wikipedia:Article size|focused]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
#:: The information in this article is slightly limited for reasons that have been discussed in the review.
#It follows the '''[[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view|neutral point of view]] policy'''.
#:''Fair representation without bias'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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#It is '''stable'''.
#:''No edit wars, etc.'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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#It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''' and other media, where possible and appropriate.
#:a ''(images are tagged and non-free content have [[Wikipedia:Non-free use rationale guideline|non-free use rationales]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}} b ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Images#Pertinence and encyclopedic nature|appropriate use]] with [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Captions|suitable captions]])'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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#'''Overall''':
#:''Pass/Fail'': {{GAList/check|Y}}
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