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=== About an event in village history, not the village ===
== Refactored early comments ==
=== About an event in village history, not the village ===
This is not an article about the village. It's mostly about the massacre which is part of the village history.<BR>
I think that this article should be edited, so that most of it will be a paragraph about the history.<BR>
What about adding some facts and info about the current village situation ?? ^^ [[User:Dod1|Dod1]] 10:23, 31 Oct 2003 (UTC)
 
=== Translation and casualty numbers ===
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=== Translation and casualty numbers ===
Translated from [http://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/שיחה:טבח_כפר_קאסם the talk page for the corresponding Hebrew entry]:
 
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[[User:217.132.33.12|217.132.33.12]] 12:53, 8 Apr 2004 (UTC)
 
=== Confusing and POV ===
This article is written in a confusing matter and from a POV perspective. It needs a rewrite.
 
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::::His lieutenant, Tsvi Shtah, testified that if P.C Frankental hadn't changed Melinki's orders, 'the same thing that happened in Kfar Qasim' would have happened in Tayibe or in Qalansawe, Ibtin and Zemer. Judges complimented Frankental and claimed that if the other P.C, Jaim Levi, would have acted like him than the Kfar Qasim disaster would have been prevented (Levi was a defeated in the Kfar Qasim incident's trial, Tough his involvement hasn't particularly damaged his career: after leaving border control Levi was a commissioner in the general jail services). in three of the four villages under Frankental's inspection there had been no casualties. In Tayibe, a village three times larger in population than Qasim, one elder local was shot to death after refusing to abide curfew and began running in the streets. [[User:Gerbillus|Gerbillus]] ([[User talk:Gerbillus|talk]]) 06:56, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
::Hey, its been a while. I was wondering if the Haaretz article is ok enough to make add at the least the names of Yehuda Frankental and Jaim Levi for now? [[User:Gerbillus|Gerbillus]] ([[User talk:Gerbillus|talk]]) 20:17, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
:[[File:Pictogram voting comment.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] &nbsp;'''Note:'''<!-- Template:EEp --> I have two further comments. Firstly, citing other Wikipedia articles is usually discouraged. It does not really contribute to [[WP:V|verifiability]]. If another Wikipedia article includes the statement in question, it should be sourced there, and you can cite that source instead of the WIkipedia article itself.
:Also, '''if you have a conflict of interest, you need to declare it and follow additional editing guidelines'''. In general, users are strongly discouraged from directly editing articles about their family or friends. You can read about conflicts of interest at [[WP:COI]] and paid editing at [[WP:PAID]]. [[User:Actualcpscm|Actualcpscm]] ([[User talk:Actualcpscm|talk]]) 17:09, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
::Yes, but Gerbillus correctly announced he had a conflict of interest. All they need do is supply the requested sources which, if judged reliable, other editors can duly use to make what would be an edit request. [[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 21:40, 25 May 2023 (UTC)