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:::*The idea is to make things as clean and concise as possible so the content can be understood easily and without confusion, and attractive so the readers will want to look at the content.  If close, visual scrutiny of the actual results is not ones thing, this is the wrong kind of language.  dmelliott 09:52, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 
:::*In adition to using the update from 'Cube Girl' to 'Cubegirl', I eliminated the quotes in its introduction.  That is, you do not say  Screen Actor's Guild ("SAG"), you just use (SAG).  I left the   in it because I assume you found some problem that it solved. dmelliott 10:2526, 24 March 2008 (UTC)