Talk:A-11 offense

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Wikipedia Editors need to know there is NO copyright infringement in this article. However, there is a person deliberately posting information wrongly and in a negative light.

Every single item posted in the article below is 100% true.

See below in "stick to facts only"

please do not cut and paste from the web

Please let us know how to properly Report EDITOR ZENG8R, he is DELIBERATELY Not Reporting correct FACTS AND TRUTHFUL INFORMATION AND NOT ALLOWING THE FULL INFORMATION CONTAINED IN THE ARTICLE TO BE POSTED? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.8.73 (talk) 16:41, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

These posted items have been checked for accuracy and there is no copyright violation, please do not alter these facts. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.34.109 (talk) 16:05, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

much of the original article has been removed due to a copyright violation. That material was copied from here. Please WP:COPYVIO for more information.--Rtphokie (talk) 02:58, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

There is no copyright violation, just a person deliberately posting wrong info. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.34.109 (talk) 17:50, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Regardless of content, copied material is likely a copyright violation and cannot be included in this article. This material has been removed once again. Please understand, this is not being done because of it's content but because it was copied from elsewhere. Everyone is encouraged to edit these articles and ensure a neutral point of view, but write it yourself and cite it properly.--Rtphokie (talk) 18:47, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

There is NO cutting and pasting from web, just facts. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.34.109 (talk) 19:37, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

THERE IS NO COPYING FROM ELSEWHERE BEING DONE, JUST FACTS. STOP CHANGING IT THANK YOU —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.34.109 (talk) 19:41, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

The article mentioned above (http://www.blitzmagonline.com/prep-football.cfm/Post/129/) is word for word identical in many places to the version of this article that you keep pasting in. The main differences are the removal of sentences which state that the A-11 is not feasable in the NCAA and the NFL under current rules. Instead, you've replaced those statements with assertions that the offense can be used right now. This is not supported by the sources in the text; for example, the statements about legality attributed to Jeff Fisher are in direct conflict with the actual text of the cited article.

You may have some conflict of interest regarding this topic; I honestly have no idea. However, your editing here is contrary to several other wikipedia guidelines as well, most importantly the notion that no one owns an article. This is a collaborative project, so please collaborate by explaining any concerns you have with the article and working with others to fix them. Thanks. Zeng8r (talk) 21:09, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Please fix any remaining copyvios

I've been noticing the discussions about copyright at A-11 offense. Other regular editors are probably more aware of the particulars. I've put semiprotection on the page, and I'd be grateful if anyone who has been following this could remove any material there which is still a copyright violation. The 31-hour block of the IP seems not to have got his attention, but he can't edit through semiprotection. He will be forced to discuss any changes that he thinks are needed. Thanks, EdJohnston (talk) 17:36, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Jeez. Thanks for the protection. I've been working to re-expand this article after the copyvio material was discovered and removed, while our persistent IP editor has replaced everything with the exact same text (mostly from another site) at least a dozen times.

The article definitely needs a description of the A-11 offense, but it has to be both original and non-promotional. The copy & pasted text fails on both counts. I don't know how that can be explained any more clearly. Zeng8r (talk) 20:34, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

PLEASE STOP WIPING THE TALK PAGE AND REPLACING IT WITH THAT SAME TEXT OVER AND OVER!!!

Thank you.

Besides the copyright issues, there's another big problem with that version of the article: the sources do not always agree with the text. For example, here are a few quotes from that ESPN the Magazine article cited at the end of the NFL section:

The A-11 isn't close to legal in the NFL, and probably never will be...

At the moment, NFL rules stand in the way. There's no scrimmage kick exception on the books. And as a result of arcane regulations, any lineman reporting as an eligible receiver has to sit out the next play—unless there's a break in the action, like a team time-out—before coming back in as an ineligible blocker...

Still, Tennessee's coaching staff has considered at least one modified application of Piedmont's creation, for third-and-short at the goal line... Curiously, Titans coach Jeff Fisher, the other co-chair of the NFL's Competition Committee, says he has no interest in modifying the rules to allow for a full-blown A-11, because it would alter the game too radically...

What I gathered from the article is that very specific ideas from the A-11 are applicable in the NFL, but the full-blown version is not currently legal and is unlikely to be legal any time soon. Your pasted text is full of interpretations that either go far beyond or directly contradict statements in ESPN article, especially Jeff Fisher's opinion on the A-11. This violates wikipedia's no original research principle, which basically states that information must come from a credible, unbiased 3rd-party source, NOT from your opinion or my opinion or the opinion of the distributors of A-11 instructional DVDs.

Some of the info in that oft-pasted text is ok, and I'll add it later today in reworded form if no one else does so first. But PLEASE stop copying and pasting that whole big spiel and accusing others of deliberately doing anything sinister. That's a poor way to get your point across. Thanks... Zeng8r (talk) 19:47, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

read the article in ESPN and then extrapolate it out to the possibilities in NFL.

PLEASE stop deleting other users' comments!!!! Add replies at the bottom of the talk page! And you can't "extrapolate" anything - like I said, original research is NOT allowed in wikipedia articles. This is especially true when your "extrapolation" seems to be at odds with a reasonable interpretation of the source. Zeng8r (talk) 21:37, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Zeng8r: Your deliberately talking about wanting to sell dvd's is disgusting on your part, and worse yet, you have appointed yourself as some type of football guru who deliberately witholds facts from these public articles. Please put the entire article up as listed, it is fact, and it is referenced.

Myself and several other users have politely and repeatedly explained the serious problems with your proposed text as written. Continuously deleting other people's comments on talk pages, accusing them of "disgusting" behavior for pointing out basic wikipedia policy, and refusing to engage in constructive collaboration is no way to make friends and/or influence wikieditors, imo, especially when you've already been blocked for similar behavior. Zeng8r (talk) 19:16, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

HOW DO WE REPORT EDITOR ZENG8R FOR DELIBERATELY DELETING FACTS AND TRUTHFUL INFORMATION AND NOT ALLOWING THE CORRECT AND FULL INFORMATION CONTAINED IN THE ARTICLE TO BE POSTED? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.12.176 (talk) 06:51, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

WE ARE NOT CUTTING AND PASTING FROM THE WEB, JUST WRITING FACTS AND INFO —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.12.176 (talk) 06:52, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

By placing the sentences above, you've reported this. However, in my opinion as an outside editor, it looks like your complaint is baseless. Flopsy Mopsy and Cottonmouth (talk) 20:17, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

EDITOR ZENG8R is DELIBERATELY Not Reporting correct FACTS AND TRUTHFUL INFORMATION AND NOT ALLOWING THE FULL INFORMATION CONTAINED IN THE ARTICLE TO BE POSTED? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.12.176 (talk) 06:54, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Restoration of talk page

I've never messed with other people's talk page comments. However, since our IP user had repeatedly wiped everything, I went back to previous versions of this page to rescue deleted discussion. Sorry for mucking around like this, and excuse me if I missed anything. I've never seen such a messed up talk page and felt that something needed to be done. Zeng8r (talk) 00:27, 11 March 2009 (UTC)

Help us Report this Editor

Please let us know how to properly Report EDITOR ZENG8R, he is DELIBERATELY Not Reporting correct FACTS AND TRUTHFUL INFORMATION AND NOT ALLOWING THE FULL INFORMATION CONTAINED IN THE ARTICLE TO BE POSTED? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.8.73 (talk) 16:42, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Wow. Over a million registered editors can add relevent, cited, encyclopedic info to this article. You've repeatedly chosen to ignore wikipedia policy and then shoot the proverbial messenger when this was repeatedly pointed out to you. This is why you've been blocked (twice) and why this article is semi-protected.

Coincidentally, I just came back to this article after a busy week to add a "description" section. Somebody else is welcome to do so, but I've suddenly lost my motivation. Zeng8r (talk) 20:06, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Done. J. Myrle Fuller (talk) 03:01, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks. The text made it seem like the "Emory & Henry" and the A-11 formations are identical so I clarified a little. To wit; the E&H spreads out the conventional 5 o-linemen while the A-11 replaces them with other players. That's while the scrimmage kick exemption is necessary to make the A-11 legal while the E&H is still usable at any level, as far as I know. Zeng8r (talk) 14:02, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Whoever did the restoration of the Article did a very good job, thank you. Now this baloney talk page can be cleared and there is no debate or apparent conflict of interest. Well done! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.8.73 (talk) 16:26, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Since you have been deleting things from the Talk page, you are already on our list of bad characters. If you change your approach and start behaving well, we might start to take you seriously and try to answer your questions carefully. It would help if you start signing your comments, like a real person. See {{uw-tilde}}. EdJohnston (talk) 18:14, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Some members of our team did the article writing and are following it in our journalism class too, along with other stories on this offense. Thank you. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.8.73 (talk) 22:23, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Do you (or is it "y'all"?) see the big difference between the tone of the current version and that of the repeatedly proposed version? One just describes while the other seems to promote. Zeng8r (talk) 14:02, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Our group is not totally pleased with your deliberate attempt at "hiding" the fact that there is a petition drive going on at a national level by teams in many states and California to keep the offense going for teams like ours, and other teams like ours. It would have been more honest of you Zeng8r to have listed that point, because there is a long way to go, and to purposefully delete that fact is not acknowledging the truth. But, since you are determined to do so, we have no choice but to succumb to your editorial power at this time. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.34.116 (talk) 19:11, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

If you have reliable, third-party sources for this petition, please post them and that info can be added to this article.--2008Olympian^chitchat 23:11, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

This user/users has/have ignored many helpful wikilinks and suggestions over the past few weeks, which is why he/they have been blocked twice. A request for sources was already made long ago and may still be on this talkpage somewhere if he/they didn't delete it during one of his/their many page wipes. That info would be just fine if cited and written in a non-promotional tone.

To the members of "group" (who, oddly enough, have only edited this single article out of the millions on this site): again, if you'd like to become helpful and constructive members of this community, please read over the Welcome to Wikipedia page, which explains the purpose and guidelines of wikipedia all in one place. Zeng8r (talk) 23:24, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Here is the 3rd Party article that also tells about Petition Drive and lists them both. http://sports.espn.go.com/espn/page2/story?page=weinreb/090302 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.37.7 (talk) 18:35, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Good link; the info has been added. Zeng8r (talk) 19:29, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

• PIEDMONT high school has Petioned the CIF to study the offense for any team in the state wanting to use it for three seasons, not the creators of the offense doing the petitioning. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.37.7 (talk) 17:03, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

From the link you provided:

In the meantime, Bryan and Humphries are not mandating that other schools adopt their methods; all they are asking for is the freedom to continue to develop their experiment in peace. They recently petitioned the CIF...

They are the creators of the A-11, and that's who the article says is petitioning the CIF. You have to go by the sources. Zeng8r (talk) 19:07, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

Zeng8r, please read the petition at www.A11Offense.com it is signed by the Piedmont High Principal —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.37.7 (talk) 21:49, 18 March 2009 (UTC)