User contributions for Hbdragon88

5 November 2024

• 19:2919:29, 5 November 2024 diff hist −374 Glitter (film) Reddit it definitely not a source for critical reception Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source
• 18:1418:14, 5 November 2024 diff hist −1 Glitter (film) fixed vandalism (someone keeps putting in Jess Mariano) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source

26 October 2024

• 23:4623:46, 26 October 2024 diff hist −20 Galileo (satellite navigation) →Main objectives: European Space Agency on first mention, ESA afterwards
• 23:4423:44, 26 October 2024 diff hist −12 Fort Leonard Wood replace {{hanote}} with {{about}} current

11 February 2024

• 23:0723:07, 11 February 2024 diff hist +15 Assia Wevill more changes from "Assia" to last name. use "Gutmann" through early life to make it less confusing.
• 22:5922:59, 11 February 2024 diff hist +2 m Lewis Carroll →The Secret World of Lewis Carroll (2015) BBC documentary: fix italics
• 22:5922:59, 11 February 2024 diff hist −125 Lewis Carroll →Controversies and mysteries: the sub-header is too long, simplified it to just "The Secret World of Lewis Carroll (2015) BBC documentary"

12 July 2023

• 07:0407:04, 12 July 2023 diff hist −101 Sha-ri Pendleton →Filmography: fix Muscles & Mayhem wikilink
• 07:0307:03, 12 July 2023 diff hist −1,968 Sha-ri Pendleton complete overhaul, removed/rewrote a lot of fluff passages, tone and style not encyclopedic

19 June 2023

• 00:2600:26, 19 June 2023 diff hist +4 Reckful →Career: replace "talented" (again, superlative) with "professional"

11 June 2023

• 07:4107:41, 11 June 2023 diff hist +66 Reckful →Personal life: add hidden comment that the phrasing is fine since it has gone back-and-forth
• 07:3607:36, 11 June 2023 diff hist +3 Reckful →Career: "talented" is puffery, replaced with more quantifiable "competitive"
• 07:3207:32, 11 June 2023 diff hist −2 Reckful Undid revision 1159497487 by Korathriller (talk) 'died by suicide' is acceptable phrasing, per MOS:SUICIDE Tag: Undo

31 May 2023

• 20:4920:49, 31 May 2023 diff hist −17 Hugo (mascot) →History: revise - the stunt happened between 1Q and 2Q, not at halftime.

30 May 2023

• 03:2903:29, 30 May 2023 diff hist 0 m Adam Air No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

6 May 2023

• 18:1018:10, 6 May 2023 diff hist −646 Hugo (mascot) remove mention of Charlotte/NO change in intro, as it's more appropriate for history section; general copyedit

8 April 2023

• 04:0104:01, 8 April 2023 diff hist −16 Assia Wevill replace most instances of "Assia" with "Wevill" for formality/tone
• 03:5703:57, 8 April 2023 diff hist +11 Frank De Martini some more rewrite
• 03:5403:54, 8 April 2023 diff hist −204 Frank De Martini rewrite, less fluff, more to the point

17 December 2022

• 23:1823:18, 17 December 2022 diff hist +1 m Melissa Doi No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 23:1823:18, 17 December 2022 diff hist −2 m Melissa Doi No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

9 November 2022

• 05:3605:36, 9 November 2022 diff hist +1,428 User talk:Mrjamesalex →November 2022: disruptive2 current
• 05:3305:33, 9 November 2022 diff hist −1,557 m Los Angeles International Airport Reverted edits by Mrjamesalex (talk) to last version by Johnj1995 Tag: Rollback

2 November 2022

• 04:2204:22, 2 November 2022 diff hist +1 m First United States Army Group No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

21 September 2022

• 03:5203:52, 21 September 2022 diff hist −9 Mohand al-Shehri minor grammar fix - we only use "nor" with "neither," but since we're not using that, changed to "or"

1 August 2022

• 04:4504:45, 1 August 2022 diff hist −450 Amanda Nunes →Early life: massive rewrite - change most "Amanda" to "Nunes" (tone), rewrite extremely fluffy sections, remove extraneous details, get to the point quicker
• 04:3004:30, 1 August 2022 diff hist +12 Harold Schultz →Second flag-raiser corrections: some more changes
• 04:2904:29, 1 August 2022 diff hist −184 Harold Schultz →Second flag-raiser corrections: some rewrite, more to the point, less wordy
• 04:2504:25, 1 August 2022 diff hist −1 m Harold Keller →Second flag raising: fix typo (Rosenthals's -> Rosenthal's)

2 April 2022

• 03:0503:05, 2 April 2022 diff hist +1 User talk:PokemonWeekly →Ritchie Valens
• 03:0503:05, 2 April 2022 diff hist +392 User talk:PokemonWeekly →Ritchie Valens: new section

29 March 2022

• 00:1300:13, 29 March 2022 diff hist −473 Ritchie Valens →Personal life: revert to my version as the fluffy/poor tone of the original was restored without explanation

16 March 2022

• 03:4103:41, 16 March 2022 diff hist −745 Ritchie Valens →Personal Life: junked most of the fluffy writing, stick to facts, formal tone

14 March 2022

• 05:4705:47, 14 March 2022 diff hist −62 Seven Years' War rewrite lead sentence to state what it is first instead of rushing right into "widely considered the first global conflict"

19 February 2022

• 05:0905:09, 19 February 2022 diff hist −1,190 Jody Wynn →Personal life: remove/rewrite super promotional-sounding wording

7 February 2022

• 20:4320:43, 7 February 2022 diff hist −87 Pitbull (rapper) →Product endorsements: complete rewrite of the (extremely) awkward sentence about David Thorpe being there
• 20:3920:39, 7 February 2022 diff hist −2 Ho Chi Minh →Early life: use of air quotes around "South Vietnam" is unnecessarily POV

4 February 2022

• 04:4404:44, 4 February 2022 diff hist −4 Ickey Woods "amazing" is peacock term, replace with quantifiable terms

31 December 2021

• 05:1705:17, 31 December 2021 diff hist −244 Bad Newz Kennels restore {{short description}} and misplaced {{cite web}} (causing display issues)

16 December 2021

• 00:3100:31, 16 December 2021 diff hist 0 Yamasaki & Associates fixed my own red link
• 00:3100:31, 16 December 2021 diff hist +36 Yamasaki & Associates wikilink to Istanbul Cevahir
• 00:2800:28, 16 December 2021 diff hist −118 Pruitt–Igoe →Design and construction: the WTC came after this project, but in this case I don't think it's really relevant to mention it.
• 00:2500:25, 16 December 2021 diff hist −7 World Trade Center (1973–2001) the Oliver Stone film isn't a documentary - change to "2006 film"

25 November 2021

• 23:4123:41, 25 November 2021 diff hist +573 N User talk:24.236.160.65 Level 2 warning current
• 23:3923:39, 25 November 2021 diff hist −5 m Lucky (memoir) Reverted edits by 24.236.160.65 (talk) to last version by 8.9.82.43 Tag: Rollback

24 November 2021

• 20:2020:20, 24 November 2021 diff hist +1,213 User talk:2600:387:0:80D:0:0:0:47 24h block current
• 20:1520:15, 24 November 2021 diff hist −14 m Lucky (memoir) Reverted edits by 2600:387:0:80D:0:0:0:47 (talk) to last version by Hbdragon88 Tag: Rollback
• 20:1320:13, 24 November 2021 diff hist +289 m Lucky (memoir) Reverted edits by 2600:387:0:80D:0:0:0:47 (talk) to last version by TheImaCow Tag: Rollback
• 20:0220:02, 24 November 2021 diff hist +632 Lucky (memoir) add conviction oveturned bit
• 19:5519:55, 24 November 2021 diff hist +387 Talk:Lucky (memoir) →Conviction oveturned: new section