User contributions for Stoarm

12 May 2023

• 16:1316:13, 12 May 2023 diff hist −39 Garth Brooks c/e, yr only for lead
• 16:1016:10, 12 May 2023 diff hist −433 Garth Brooks remove identical (verbatim) content already included in the body, clearly not lead-worthy (lead should summarize only the most important contents of the article)

9 May 2023

• 13:1013:10, 9 May 2023 diff hist −21 Talk:Dennis Wojtanowski rmv template
• 02:1202:12, 9 May 2023 diff hist +14 North High School (Eastlake, Ohio) →top: update, sourced in Infobox
• 02:0802:08, 9 May 2023 diff hist −723 North High School (Eastlake, Ohio) MOS/IB–doesn't belong, N/A alpha order and standardize for general notability (listings without high quality sources for verification of attendance and/or year may be removed at any time)

7 May 2023

• 19:4619:46, 7 May 2023 diff hist −83 Dennis Wojtanowski →Philanthropic work and awards: remove unsourced content inserted by Dennywojo]]
• 19:3319:33, 7 May 2023 diff hist +8 Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard →Dennis Wojtanowski: more clarity
• 19:3219:32, 7 May 2023 diff hist +105 Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard →Dennis Wojtanowski: +diff
• 19:2119:21, 7 May 2023 diff hist +16 Eastlake, Ohio more clarity
• 19:1819:18, 7 May 2023 diff hist −1 Eastlake, Ohio previously updated in infobox, reorder lead content, c/e
• 19:1419:14, 7 May 2023 diff hist +5 Eastlake, Ohio m
• 19:1419:14, 7 May 2023 diff hist −108 Eastlake, Ohio lead should only summarize, details belong in the body
• 19:0719:07, 7 May 2023 diff hist −441 Eastlake, Ohio →2003 Northeast blackout: r/w for what's relevant and noteworthy to this article, readers can link to the article about the event for all the details.
• 18:2918:29, 7 May 2023 diff hist −3 Eastlake, Ohio →2003 Northeast blackout: too vague to warrant r/l
• 18:2818:28, 7 May 2023 diff hist −11 South High School (Willoughby, Ohio) common name/must match article title
• 18:2218:22, 7 May 2023 diff hist +20 Talk:Dennis Wojtanowski BLPN template
• 18:2118:21, 7 May 2023 diff hist +801 Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard →Dennis Wojtanowski: new section
• 17:5417:54, 7 May 2023 diff hist −251 North High School (Eastlake, Ohio) r/w, c/e, rmv content that is non-encyclopedic or doesn't belong in the lead
• 17:5117:51, 7 May 2023 diff hist −9 North High School (Eastlake, Ohio) common name/matches article title
• 17:4217:42, 7 May 2023 diff hist −365 Eastlake, Ohio →Schools: r/w to include what belongs in city article
• 17:1717:17, 7 May 2023 diff hist −877 Eastlake, Ohio →Sports and culture: unencylopedic, promotional quote
• 17:1617:16, 7 May 2023 diff hist −91 Eastlake, Ohio →Sports and culture: subsections unnecessary
• 17:1217:12, 7 May 2023 diff hist −48 Eastlake, Ohio doesn't belong in the lead
• 16:5716:57, 7 May 2023 diff hist −4 ProPublica c/e

6 May 2023

• 16:5716:57, 6 May 2023 diff hist +11 Charles III c/e, c/n, more precise

2 May 2023

• 02:3002:30, 2 May 2023 diff hist −3 Nazareth (band) MOS 10+/consistency

30 April 2023

• 13:0813:08, 30 April 2023 diff hist 0 Abington Township, Montgomery County, Pennsylvania alpha order
• 13:0713:07, 30 April 2023 diff hist +4 Joey Lawrence →Early life: split sentence, c/e, names per cn
• 12:5912:59, 30 April 2023 diff hist +297 Joey Lawrence add source
• 12:5012:50, 30 April 2023 diff hist +256 Joey Lawrence →Early life: add source
• 12:3712:37, 30 April 2023 diff hist −331 Joey Lawrence →Early life: c/e for accuray, remove unreliable source which acknowledges it isn't even sure and incorrectly states the county as the residence city (township)
• 12:2512:25, 30 April 2023 diff hist +1 Joey Lawrence →Early life: m
• 12:2012:20, 30 April 2023 diff hist +544 Joey Lawrence corrected year of career start, add video source from of him explaining when and how he got CJ commercial; expand Carson content and add video source

29 April 2023

• 21:4421:44, 29 April 2023 diff hist −63 Karen Friedman Hill →Early life: reliable source(s) required
• 21:4321:43, 29 April 2023 diff hist +138 Talk:Karen Friedman Hill →Socialite?
• 21:4221:42, 29 April 2023 diff hist −33 Karen Friedman Hill how? no content or sources to substantiate it
• 21:3821:38, 29 April 2023 diff hist −6 Karen Friedman Hill gender doesn't belong here
• 20:3620:36, 29 April 2023 diff hist +29 Lori Lightfoot →2023 mayoral campaign: r/w, c/e
• 20:3020:30, 29 April 2023 diff hist −274 Lori Lightfoot this portion doesn't belong in her bio, content ends with her elimination, "see also" w/link provided for readers who want further details
• 20:2420:24, 29 April 2023 diff hist −35 Lori Lightfoot doesn't belong here, infobox will be updated soon
• 20:1720:17, 29 April 2023 diff hist 0 Red Band Society w/link on first mention
• 20:1520:15, 29 April 2023 diff hist −16 Red Band Society →Broadcast: c/e, remove w/link per WP:OVERLINK
• 20:1220:12, 29 April 2023 diff hist −104 Red Band Society r/w and simplify lead, broadcast details that aren't lead-worthy relocated to body
• 19:4919:49, 29 April 2023 diff hist −3 Red Band Society merge lead paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH (1.8k)
• 04:5504:55, 29 April 2023 diff hist +2 Dilbert unnecessary in the lead

27 April 2023

• 17:4017:40, 27 April 2023 diff hist −3 Scott Adams as explained in prior edit summary, he said "people", not "Americans"
• 17:3717:37, 27 April 2023 diff hist +68 Scott Adams restoring ALT2 wording to align with body text, but I will not object if ALT1 supporters change it back; c/e for accuracy and specificity based on the exact quote (see video ref attached): "the best advice I would give to White people is to get the hell away from Black people"
• 17:1317:13, 27 April 2023 diff hist −1 Scott Adams merge lead paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH (currently 18.3k readable prose), reorder content
• 17:0517:05, 27 April 2023 diff hist +6 Scott Adams he said "people", not "Americans"; attaching the existing video ref from the body for undisputable verification
• 17:0017:00, 27 April 2023 diff hist −52 Scott Adams Replace RfC option ALT2 with option ALT1. Per RfC close, Options B, ALT1, and ALT2 are all acceptable, and ALT1 has significantly more support than ALT2.