Talk:Autumn Uprising of 1946
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I have amended the paragraph on the events of October 1 and 2: the previous version's source is no longer available and gives a very different version to that of the two sources I was able to find. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BobBadg (talk • contribs) 21:05, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
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- Lead needs to be shortened MOS:INTRO
- No need for citations in lead unless particularly controversial claims MOS:LEAD
- Grammar needs thorough revision; there's grammar issues in nearly every sentence
- Typos (extra spaces in particular)
- Excessive links MOS:OVERLINK