Talk:Traditional Chinese medicine/Archive 11
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Second sentence
I recently tried to change the 2nd sentence of the article to one that is already in the article in the critique. If it's the same piece of information, and already in the article, why is this a problem?
Why is this not neutral?
The introduction reads: "It has been described." By whom? Also if we're not going to attribute the quote to anyone, it seems to appear out of the ether. "The gods of Reason have decreed TCM," when it's in fact a single, highly opinionated editorial.
I don't understand why the aforementioned editorial should be the second sentence, but assuming the harm to the reader is so great it needs to be there, why not attribute it to Nature (as it is in the critique, where like many criticisms on the TCM page, it is repeated again). Or if we're going to attribute this quote to a mysterious "It," why not find additional sources, and certainly ones more authoritative than an editorial.
65.128.136.19 (talk) 13:15, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
- The lead summaries the article. "Summarize" means concentrate on the essentials. The information who exactly said that is not essential. --Hob Gadling (talk) 13:25, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
- Right, but they are the same exact sentence, so it's not a summary. In the lead the sentence reads: "It has been described as "fraught with pseudoscience", and the majority of its treatments as having no logical mechanism of action.[1]"
- In the next section, it reads: "A Nature editorial described TCM as "fraught with pseudoscience", and said that the most obvious reason why it has not delivered many cures is that the majority of its treatments have no logical mechanism of action.[1] "
- Exact same sentence except the first is deliberately vague to enhance the "badness" of TCM. I tried to change it to "A Nature editorial reads..." and was called biased.
- For what it's worth, the editorial has no citations, no evidence. It's simply opining. This isn't really a reference that makes a case for TCM being pseudo-science. I think if the 2nd line of the lead is going to declare TCM a pseudo-science there should be something better to reference than an editorial. I mean, if we're being well...scientific here.65.128.136.19 (talk) 16:45, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
- It's not the exact same sentence because the irrelevant details are missing in the intro. Yes, it would be better style if the wording were a bit different, but then SCAM proponents would complain that it is unsourced. --Hob Gadling (talk) 09:55, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, the editorial has no citations, no evidence. It's simply opining. This isn't really a reference that makes a case for TCM being pseudo-science. I think if the 2nd line of the lead is going to declare TCM a pseudo-science there should be something better to reference than an editorial. I mean, if we're being well...scientific here.65.128.136.19 (talk) 16:45, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Distinguishing TCM from "Western" Medicine
There is a disagreement on how to distinguish TCM from modern, western medicine. Both sides have their points. Since the main feature distinguishing the two is the use of double-blind, random-controlled studies to prove safety and efficacy in western medicine, I propose the widely-used term "evidence-based medicine" or "modern, evidence-based medicine" for the latter. I will wait for a week before making this change to see if there is a better suggestion. JimGibson1 (talk) 18:25, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
- What is western medicine? -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 19:57, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
- It refers to typical, scientifically-developed Western medicine. Lots of TCM ideas are mostly pseudoscientific (the yin/yang and all that crazy stuff), but some (few) are scientifically proven and work well, and are mixed with Western medicine in China (I know berberine/huang lian su is one). Félix An (talk) 02:57, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- "The safety of using berberine for any condition is not adequately defined by high-quality clinical research. Its potential for causing adverse effects is high, including untoward interactions with prescription drugs, reducing the intended effect of established therapies. It is particularly unsafe for use in children." - That is a quote from our article on berberine. Clearly not to be used medically. -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 07:20, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- I use it all the time when I have diarrhea. My doctor recommended it too. Apparently it's very popular in China, and last year when I went to China and had diarrhea, all the pharmacists recommended it. It worked well for me. I guess it might not work as well as other Western medicines, but oh well... Félix An (talk) 14:47, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- May I suggest a very large cork and a change of doctors? -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 16:28, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- Cork???? I don't get the cork part. Félix An (talk) 16:40, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- It'll help in the interim till you get a new doc. -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 17:12, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- Eww, nevermind the cork, this WP:RS shows that it seems to work: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3504405/ Félix An (talk) 20:02, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- For medical claims we have a higher standard of sourcing than WP:RS, it is called WP:MEDRS, and I'm afraid a case study is not really acceptable as a source for us, and nobody should conclude from a case study alone that something works. -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 20:28, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- Eww, nevermind the cork, this WP:RS shows that it seems to work: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3504405/ Félix An (talk) 20:02, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- It'll help in the interim till you get a new doc. -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 17:12, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- Cork???? I don't get the cork part. Félix An (talk) 16:40, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- May I suggest a very large cork and a change of doctors? -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 16:28, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- I use it all the time when I have diarrhea. My doctor recommended it too. Apparently it's very popular in China, and last year when I went to China and had diarrhea, all the pharmacists recommended it. It worked well for me. I guess it might not work as well as other Western medicines, but oh well... Félix An (talk) 14:47, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- "The safety of using berberine for any condition is not adequately defined by high-quality clinical research. Its potential for causing adverse effects is high, including untoward interactions with prescription drugs, reducing the intended effect of established therapies. It is particularly unsafe for use in children." - That is a quote from our article on berberine. Clearly not to be used medically. -Roxy the inedible dog . wooF 07:20, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
- It refers to typical, scientifically-developed Western medicine. Lots of TCM ideas are mostly pseudoscientific (the yin/yang and all that crazy stuff), but some (few) are scientifically proven and work well, and are mixed with Western medicine in China (I know berberine/huang lian su is one). Félix An (talk) 02:57, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
POV?
I don't think that this article is written from a WP:NPOV, because it does not mention that some TCM treatments are scientifically proven. Many of the headings are followed with "and pseudoscience", making the reader that TCM is 100% pseudoscientific, which it is not (it is true that many aspects are pseudoscientific, but many are also clinically proven). Félix An (talk) 19:35, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- We already have an article for that covers all of TCM that has been clinically proven. It is called "Medicine".
- Medical treatments originating in China that have been proven to be effective in double-blind clinical trials are called "Medicine" while medical treatments originating in China that are based upon preying on the gullible are called "Traditional Chinese Medicine". --Guy Macon (talk) 21:03, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- actually, they are covered--see my comment below. It seems very appropriate to include those very few specific instances. For one thing, they point out very clearly by contrast the lack of demonstrated usefulness of the great majority of the treatments. I'd even say it's the best way of doing so.
Regardless of the absurdities of many Eastern (and Western) medical theories, some of what they used empirically has proven of use in scientific medicine; this history is an important subject to include, and we can get considerably more specific than "medicine". I think it needs a separate article--(which I am personally not about to write). DGG ( talk ) 20:09, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
pseudoscience
I think we are over egging the cake, we do not need to keep on. Also I am not sure it should be mentioned in the first line of the lede.Slatersteven (talk) 17:13, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
- Possibly the second line of the lede is the place. It's appropriate that people realize this quickly if they didn't know. But once they realize it, there's no point in saying it over and over. The problem is with three sections: Critique, YTCM Model of the body, and Herbal medicine subsection on Efficacy. And if we are talking about scientific medicine,, we need to distinguish more clearly between studies showing "no evidence of effectiveness" and studies (if any) showing "evidence of ineffectiveness", which is a statistically much more difficult concept to prove . Cochrane studies are usually quite rigorous in how they use these terms, and I am not aware of any that were able to conclude that there was MEDRS quality evidence that it was ineffective. If there are, they should certainly be included. The summarization of the efficacy section could be:
- There have been no studies proving that TCM in general, is either more or less effective than SM, or that most individual TCM therapies are more or less effective than SM alternatives -- except for some few TCM drugs that have proven more effective than SM alternatives available at the time. (ephedra , artemisen, pi-shuang (arsenic trioxide ) -- and we can't put AsO3 in the herb section , which is where it is now.
- The word pseudoscience is no longer present in the lead at all, "pseudoscientific" sounds somehow less correct, and I think the word "pseudoscience" should be present in he very first sentence, for the avoidance of any doubt. There's no reason to repeat "pseudoscientific" where one mention of "pseudoscience" in the first sentence and another use of "pseudoscientific" to describe its (latter-day) methods would be plenty. GPinkerton (talk) 19:05, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
- agreed, though there may be one or two other places where it will clarify. DGG ( talk ) 20:14, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
Blaming TCm for Covid 19 is false
Why is it allowed to be assuming that TCM is responsible for Covid 19 when there’s no evidence to support that and many think snakes are responsible for Covid transmission anyways? Kizemet (talk) 10:10, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- I bet you didn't read the article. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 10:13, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- See 2019_nCoV/SARS‐CoV‐2: rapid classification of betacoronaviruses and identification of Traditional Chinese Medicine as potential origin of zoonotic coronaviruses[1] --Guy Macon (talk) 12:44, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
I think the Chinese version of this article is written more neutrally.
Not anything of encyclopedic value and not a hint of MEDRS in this. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 15:42, 20 April 2021 (UTC) |
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The English version seems to have an extremely negative view of TCM. See the Chinese version, which has a more neutrally-written controversy section: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%AD%E5%8C%BB%E5%AD%A6 Félix An (talk) 14:03, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
A dated but well-controlled clinical studyTrusted Source from 2002 concluded that treatment with this traditional Asian herb was superior to a placebo for the relief of COPD symptoms. People taking ginseng experienced significant improvements in breathing and the ability to perform exercise, compared to similar subjects who received an inactive treatment. https://www.healthline.com/health/copd/herbs-supplements Clearly some practises are not harmful and do have studies supporting it. But the current article fixates top heavily on the more absurd practises like animal penises, etc and I agree those things are likely bs. Which currently is well overrepresented in the current article to the point that it seems to be overwhelmingly about that and nothing much else. But natural herbs and therapies like Tai Chi, are not like that and it's not right to oversimplify it as representing the entire subject. The article isn't helpful and needs a re-write. As people and studies do find benefits in some of the natural therapies that are backed by modern studies. And contradict the current intro. Ie. https://www.healthline.com/health/tai-chi-benefits#better-sleep Casualfoodie (talk) 08:02, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Why write "promoted by the Chinese government"? This topic should not even need to be political and corrupted by sinophobic rationale. The gov never created this practice but the Chinese people for many centuries were the ones who created it. Can you find any evidence that Tai Chi is unhealthy and has no benefits? And also Healthline didn't create those studies. They merely cited them like other evidence based websites and gives sources to the direct studies. https://health.clevelandclinic.org/the-health-benefits-of-tai-chi/ Do you think "non-Chinese studies" that show the benefits of Tai Chi, should be ignored? To call Tai Chi as pseudo science is wrong and misleading as you got no evidence to say that it is harmful or has no benefits. The article makes sweeping claims that the entire discipline yields no benefits when that is unlikely to be accurate. Casualfoodie (talk) 08:55, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Well for those unfamiliar with TCM. Accupuncture is a legitimate part of TCM. Have you editors even tried it or read the studies that show that more research is needed before making a solid conclusion. Here is a high quality peer reviewed of reviews report about acupuncture.. generally that more research is needed but overall it seems promising. This is the first review of reviews that explores acupuncture’s effectiveness in treating components of the TSR. Based on the results of our review, acupuncture has demonstrated benefit for the treatment of headaches; however, safety needs to be more fully documented in order to make any strong recommendations in support of its use in treating headaches. Though more research is needed to determine whether acupuncture is useful in treating anxiety, sleep disturbances, depression and chronic pain, it does seem to be a promising treatment option. Based on our results, acupuncture does not seem to be effective for treating substance abuse, and there needs to be more high quality data before we can determine whether acupuncture is an appropriate intervention for fatigue or cognitive difficulties. Researchers have not completely ruled out its effectiveness unlike the nature opinion piece that is smack top in current intro..if research is still needed, it would be closeminded and premature to not make that part clear for the public. If however lots of research concluded that it's ineffective. Then the current intro would be fitting except we are not there yet and so you should be careful to write off those hard to understand non western disciplines as useless..show me evidence and studies conclusively stating that they're ineffective? You can't yet seem more than okay to make that conclusion despite lack of peer reviewed evidence to support your statement either. Casualfoodie (talk) 14:12, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
I said that because one person earlier told me that we weren't talking about accupuncture.... so I told him that accupuncture is part of TCM. AND so far research shows that stuff like accupuncture has shown promising results and actual scientists state that we need more data to understand it better. I am actually not saying that accupuncture works or doesn't work. But instead o. Saying we should note that more research is needed as stated by actual scientists. Not astrologers. This is the first review of reviews that explores acupuncture’s effectiveness in treating components of the TSR. Based on the results of our review, acupuncture has demonstrated benefit for the treatment of headaches; however, safety needs to be more fully documented in order to make any strong recommendations in support of its use in treating headaches. Though more research is needed to determine whether acupuncture is useful in treating anxiety, sleep disturbances, depression and chronic pain, it does seem to be a promising treatment option. Casualfoodie (talk) 15:58, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Actually a Harvard source would disagree with you. Indeed, from the 1970s to around 2005, the skeptic’s point of view was understandable, because the scientific evidence to show that acupuncture worked, and why, was weak, and clinical trials were small and of poor quality. But things have changed since then. A lot. Individual large-scale clinical studies have consistently demonstrated that acupuncture provided better pain relief compared with usual care. However, most studies also showed little difference between real and sham (fake) acupuncture. In order to address this concern, a 2012 meta-analysis combined data from roughly 18,000 individual patients in 23 high-quality randomized controlled trials of acupuncture for common pain conditions. This analysis conclusively demonstrated that acupuncture is superior to sham for low back pain, headache, and osteoarthritis, and improvements seen were similar to that of other widely used non-opiate pain relievers. https://www.health.harvard.edu/blog/acupuncture-for-headache-2018012513146 Casualfoodie (talk) 17:28, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Intro should just be an intro and not a single critiqueIn yoga, we have a more neutral intro that doesn't go on and on about being a quack science or that yoga is not backed by evidence. In TCM, it deserves an intro that actually introduces the long history and the entire branches. But the unusually short and current intro instead gives the premature impression that practises like Tai Chi, accupuncture, Herbal drinks, etc are ineffective despite that's not really fair. The important aspect is whether the practises actually offers any benefits. Sometimes things like vaccination that was first invented by the Chinese accidentally about a thousand years ago was useful, despite they likely didn't understand it. But the practice proved beneficial and it continued. Accupuncture has been used by so many people for so long and is generally not harmful. We don't have a lot of high quality research to back the benefits but that doesn't mean it's useless and yields no benefits as this intro currently implies. Instead Accupuncture has some effects on serotonin levels which has many benefits but we are currently still in the process of understanding the whole thing via modern studies. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/16565594/ So I think the intro should be neutral and not make sweeping critiques.. and instead the critique should stay in the criticism section that is already there. The intro should just be an intro. As long as we don't have enough studies to confirm that practises like Tai Chi or meditation is useless. It's wrong to write the entire discipline as being something to avoid and discredited when we don't even know enough about the human body and if accupuncture, meditation, Tai Chi or ginseng is useless and pointless garbage as this article intro made it seem like. Casualfoodie (talk) 10:35, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Accupuncture is a huge part of traditional Chinese medicine. Do you even know the basics of TCM? Most of it centres around qi and a vibrant nervous system. Scientists are only just starting to study accupuncture and it's physiological basis. Sources https://www.inverse.com/article/33787-acupuncture-science-complementary-medicine-pain-relief and it's a hard UNDENIABLE fact that there's currently a lack of quality research and such context shouldn't be hidden from the public when it's true and a relevant factor to keep in mind. Casualfoodie (talk) 13:48, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
@MrOllie Show me your sources that it's a Sham science.i like to see that. Currently and I quote "There aren’t enough well-designed studies to rule out or confirm that improvements after acupuncture aren’t just a placebo effect or occur simply because you expect them to." Hence the intro should at least mention that undeniable and yet significant fact that there's overall limited research not just on accupuncture (which is a big part of TCM) but the entire field including Tai Chi, herbal medicines, etc. I don't see why people would see that as infactual as that is objectively true that not enough research has been conducted yet and that is something we can all at least agree on and confirm. Casualfoodie (talk) 13:56, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
How do you know it's not effective? Have you ever tried it? It's reported in research journals that it's difficult for scientists to be able to find out conclusively of accupuncture works as there's so many variables to work out. But here's a source. An ABC article noted that injecting naloxone - a known inhibitor of the brain's endorphin system - into cats blocked the ability of acupuncture to reduce blood pressure. Source https://www.abc.net.au/science/articles/1999/06/04/27924.htm Casualfoodie (talk) 14:03, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Intro disputeI was told to go to the talk page and hear your arguments on why my edit was wrong. I like to hear it here. I added in two edits recently that was later reverted. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1018138570 https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1018138274 I added in that there was currently a lack of quality research on the field as that is true if you go Read the science journals. And also it wasn't a scholarly consensus that it has no logical basis..that claim came from a single opinion piece from Nature Other researchers like below admitted that they need more research to prove that certain activities and meridian points actually exist.. https://www.abc.net.au/science/articles/1999/06/04/27924.htm
As long as research is ongoing. It's just wrong to jump to conclusions as if we already know the answers. We are still learning and recent research shows that scientists found out that "injecting naloxone - a known inhibitor of the brain's endorphin system - into cats blocked the ability of acupuncture to reduce blood pressure." https://www.abc.net.au/science/articles/1999/06/04/27924.htm And afterwards they found out and I quote; Effective acupuncture increased and prolonged the activity of serotonergic neurons in the reward system pathway of the brain. This suggests that oriental acupuncture therapy may be effective for the treatment of emotional disorders, drug abuse and alcoholism. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/16565594/ So clearly we are still learning. It's not just accupuncture either.. Tai Chi disciplines have shown promising results as well as Astragalus for COPD. So it's not like we can say for a solid fact here that conclusive research has proven that merdian points are fake or accupuncture is useless or ineffective. You don't know that as there still needs research and data and sadly natural Herbal therapies generally don't get as much funding compared to big pharmaceutical. Hence its important to at least note that in the intro that research is still ongoing to prove meridian points, etc but there is currently a lack of quality research and that part is at least true here..Is there a neutral reason why such info shouldn't be added to give noted context? It's not our job to conclude that TCM doesn't work. It is our job to note the facts that there is currently a lack of research and current studies are still ongoing. And let the public be aware of that and not make conclusions for them. Btw there is no conclusive evidence yet to go show that TCM does not work. So it's also ultimately wrong here for the intro to outright imply that on the beginning of the article as if that is the most solid info.. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Casualfoodie (talk • contribs)
But making it clear to readers who said that particular phrase. Casualfoodie (talk) 16:47, 16 April 2021 (UTC) Why can't the intro mention that it was a nature opinion piece that made those specific claims? Or the fact that there's indeed currently a lack of quality research on the field? Those things are both true and should be mentioned. Casualfoodie (talk) 16:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Maybe it's the same for every natural therapies. Too many variables and not profitable enough to pursue. Nobody can patent accupuncture or TCM but that doesn't mean that it's nonsense. Not enough research on ginseng does not prove it is useless. Research however solidly shows serotonin levels rise during accupuncture. Also You wouldn't have all these universities continuing to scientifically study it if it was conclusively confirmed as nonsense. https://www.takingcharge.csh.umn.edu/tcm-evidence-based-and-safe Even AACP said: Acupuncture has long been seen, incorrectly, as an alternative treatment for pain management, however, this new guideline reconfirms its effectiveness as a viable and medically proven treatment to reduce pain for millions, without the need for medication They endorse accupuncture and I don't see them endorsing flat earth or ESP Casualfoodie (talk) 17:10, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Funny how I keep giving sources that you keep ignoring..you're speculating that it's nonsense but here's a well researched Harvard paper directly contradicting you that there's research to show that it shouldn't be written off prematurely. https://www.health.harvard.edu/blog/acupuncture-for-headache-2018012513146 Casualfoodie (talk) 17:30, 16 April 2021 (UTC) Thanks Felix An. I actually think that's the best idea. Article should have a Balanced perspective where you present two sides of the story, as that is at least more fair and neutral given the genuine lack of conclusive evidence. Since we clearly have professionals like Harvard, AACP, etc stating that accupuncture and TCM works and shows their research, while others scholars just write it off without actually doing research.. I quote: Indeed, from the 1970s to around 2005, the skeptic’s point of view was understandable, because the scientific evidence to show that acupuncture worked, and why, was weak, and clinical trials were small and of poor quality. But things have changed since then. A lot. Individual large-scale clinical studies have consistently demonstrated that acupuncture provided better pain relief compared with usual care. However, most studies also showed little difference between real and sham (fake) acupuncture. In order to address this concern, a 2012 meta-analysis combined data from roughly 18,000 individual patients in 23 high-quality randomized controlled trials of acupuncture for common pain conditions. This analysis conclusively demonstrated that acupuncture is superior to sham for low back pain, headache, and osteoarthritis, and improvements seen were similar to that of other widely used non-opiate pain relievers. Clearly not all scholars consider TCM disciplines as complete nonsense and the Wikipedia article needs to include all scholar views such as the Harvard paper above. To allow just one writer to completely and overwhelmingly dominate the introduction is not Balanced especially when there's a wide range of scholars who clearly disagrees with his opinion. Casualfoodie (talk) 17:39, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
@ Roxy the grumpy dog We won't get anywhere if you keep gaslighting that I didn't give reliable sources. You just keep pretending as if I didn't..yet my last reply clearly gave you a Harvard medical article stating: In order to address this concern, a 2012 meta-analysis combined data from roughly 18,000 individual patients in 23 high-quality randomized controlled trials of acupuncture for common pain conditions. This analysis conclusively demonstrated that acupuncture is superior to sham for low back pain, headache, and osteoarthritis, and improvements seen were similar to that of other widely used non-opiate pain relievers. And here's all the sources to back that Harvard paper who already provided sources in its page. Sources Acupuncture in patients with osteoarthritis of the knee: a randomised trial. Lancet, July 2005. Acupuncture in Patients With Chronic Low Back Pain: A Randomized Controlled Trial. JAMA Internal Medicine, February 2006. Acupuncture in patients with tension-type headache: randomised controlled trial. BMJ, August 2005. Acupuncture for Patients With Migraine: A Randomized Controlled Trial. JAMA, May 2005. Acupuncture for Chronic Pain: Individual Patient Data Meta-analysis. JAMA Internal Medicine, October 2012. Survey of Adverse Events Following Acupuncture (SAFA): a prospective study of 32,000 consultations. Acupuncture in Medicine, December 2001. Safety of Acupuncture: Results of a Prospective Observational Study with 229,230 Patients and Introduction of a Medical Information and Consent Form. Complementary Medicine Research, April 2009. The safety of acupuncture during pregnancy: a systematic review. Acupuncture in Medicine, June 2014. Cost-effectiveness of adjunct non-pharmacological interventions for osteoarthritis of the knee. PLOS One, March 2017. Paradoxes in Acupuncture Research: Strategies for Moving Forward. Evidence-Based Complementary and Alternative Medcine, 2011. The Long-term Effect of Acupuncture for Migraine Prophylaxis: A Randomized Clinical Trial. JAMA Internal Medicine, April 2017. Don't say I never gave sources. I just did. Casualfoodie (talk) 17:56, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
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Basic confusion: "TCM" was not found in Traditional China; it was a 20th century invented tradition
In traditional China there were many schools and types of medicine, there was no medical profession to enforce a monopoly of practice. Only when missionaries and Japanese doctors introduced the medicine of their day did the need arise to call anything "Chinese medicine." It was just "medicine." In the 1920s, partly with the backing of the government, medical schools applied new techniques and tried to identify what could be selected from earlier practices to create a Traditional Chinese Medicine. It then got very complicated, but the point here is that this article confuses "medicine in traditional China" with Traditional Chinese Medicine. TCM is a good example of an Invented tradition. Please see, among many others, Andrews, Bridie (2013). The Making of Modern Chinese Medicine. Vancouver: UBC Press. ISBN 0774824328.
Therefore the lead and the article should distinguish the two. Medicine in traditional China should be explained in the same neutral terms used in Traditional medicine: "comprises medical aspects of traditional knowledge that developed over generations within the folk beliefs of various societies before the era of modern medicine." Then explain that TCM is derived from traditional practice but different from it. The more up to date version of NCCAM2012 (cited in note 2 and 7 others) explains that "In the United States, TCM is considered part of complementary and alternative medicine (CAM)," and that "In spite of the widespread use of TCM in China and its use in the West, scientific evidence of its effectiveness is, for the most part, limited." This is a more explicit and reliable source than the editorial used in the present lead, and is more precise.
The treatment of actual practice in traditional China is elaborate trash, incomplete and very misleading, because it continues this confusion. ch (talk) 05:24, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nixon and Mao have a lot to answer for, dont they. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 05:27, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
- At least one of them was "not a crook".
- About the suggestion: Sounds good. The article does mention Mao's actions and quotes Levinovitz "Chairman Mao Invented Traditional Chinese Medicine" several times, but the lead should not be silent about this important aspect. --Hob Gadling (talk) 10:10, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- Entirely agree that the lead must emphasize that TCM as practiced today does not meet scientific standards. I am uncomfortable but will go along with applying the label "pseudoscientific," which is not applied to other Traditional medicines, to TCM of today. The lead can make clear that, again, medical practice in traditional China was much messier and unsystematic than what is called TCM today -- sometimes appalling, sometimes a beautiful philosophical system, sometimes deadly, and in some instances more effective than the Western counterpart. It must be explained in its complexity and historical context, which TCM practitioners do not do when they cherry-pick only what they want. Medicine in Europe before Pasteur and the creation of the modern medical profession, was, of course, equally messy and unsystematic.ch (talk) 20:43, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
- I should note we apply the same standards to Ayurveda and Siddha Medicine, though I agree it could be worded better. I agree that the lead should mention and emphasise the creation of modern TCM in 1950 by the CCP. Hemiauchenia (talk) 20:55, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
- Entirely agree that the lead must emphasize that TCM as practiced today does not meet scientific standards. I am uncomfortable but will go along with applying the label "pseudoscientific," which is not applied to other Traditional medicines, to TCM of today. The lead can make clear that, again, medical practice in traditional China was much messier and unsystematic than what is called TCM today -- sometimes appalling, sometimes a beautiful philosophical system, sometimes deadly, and in some instances more effective than the Western counterpart. It must be explained in its complexity and historical context, which TCM practitioners do not do when they cherry-pick only what they want. Medicine in Europe before Pasteur and the creation of the modern medical profession, was, of course, equally messy and unsystematic.ch (talk) 20:43, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
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This is biased: "Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) is a branch of traditional medicine in China. It has been described as "fraught with pseudoscience", and the majority of its treatments as having no logical mechanism of action.[1] " The source is also incorrect. The efficacy of TCM has been clearly shown. From pubmed... https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/20192915/ "Objectives: 'The methodology of a randomized clinical trial (RCT) is not free from bias', and the unique features of TCM (such as individualization and holism) further complicate effective execution of RCTs in TCM therapies. Thus, data from limited RCTs and systematic reviews need to be interpreted with great caution. Nevertheless, until new and specific methodology is developed that can adequately address these methodology challenges for RCTs in TCM, evidence from quality RCTs and systematic reviews still holds the credibility of TCM in the scientific community. additionally... From Lin, Zhen MD; Jiang, Mengyuan MD; Gao, Lirong MD; Zhang, Huachun MD∗Author Information Medicine: September 25, 2020 - Volume 99 - Issue 39 - p e22403 doi: 10.1097/MD.0000000000022403
"2.2.4.1 Primary outcomes
The criterion of efficacy was divided into 4 categories refer to WHO standard. Complete Remission (CR): effusion disappears and symptoms are relieved for at least 4 weeks; Partial Remission (PR): the effusion was reduced by more than 50% compared with that before treatment, and the symptoms were relieved and maintained for at least 4 weeks; Stable (SD): the effusion decreased by less than 50% compared with that before treatment, with no increasing trend, and the symptoms partially relieved; Invalid (PD): effusion grows rapidly. The total effective rate was (CR+PR)/ (CR+PR+SD+PD) × 100%."
Just a couple of "positive" reports/studies on the efficacy of TCM. There is a lot of info like this that is easily obtainable. The linguistic bias up front in this wiki is obvious and should be corrected. Thank you 2001:5B0:2C49:34E8:3801:5AF1:7866:1F0C (talk) 19:08, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- This is not an edit request. You need to be very specific in your edit request, perhaps indicating what you think should be changed, and with a WP:MEDRS source to support your change. -Roxy the happy dog . wooF 19:13, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- That source seems to be a MEDRS, so I will add it in and keep it alongside the pseudoscience claim. Félix An (talk) 19:19, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- Perhaps you would find it useful to review WP:MEDRS again, preferably before you edit the article. thanks. -Roxy the happy dog . wooF 19:29, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- Why is it not MEDRS? I reviewed the policy and found no apparent violations.Idealistic Lily (talk) 14:19, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- It's in an unreliable publication, and is ten years old. -Roxy the happy dog . wooF 21:02, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- 10 years is not unacceptably old for MEDRS when there is a scarcity of newer material available. Some medical topics that don't see a lot of new studies being published use sources that are a LOT older than that, because that's all that there is. You've declared that it is an "unreliable publication", but failed to go into any additional details as to why it is unreliable. is every source that contains something you personally don't like automatically considered unreliable? Firejuggler86 (talk) 06:34, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
- Yes. I like reliable sources. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 09:17, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
- To give a proper answer. It's in the Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine, which is published by Society for Acupuncture Research, a pro-acupuncture avocacy group. Hemiauchenia (talk) 18:06, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
- Yes. I like reliable sources. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 09:17, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
- 10 years is not unacceptably old for MEDRS when there is a scarcity of newer material available. Some medical topics that don't see a lot of new studies being published use sources that are a LOT older than that, because that's all that there is. You've declared that it is an "unreliable publication", but failed to go into any additional details as to why it is unreliable. is every source that contains something you personally don't like automatically considered unreliable? Firejuggler86 (talk) 06:34, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
- It's in an unreliable publication, and is ten years old. -Roxy the happy dog . wooF 21:02, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Why is it not MEDRS? I reviewed the policy and found no apparent violations.Idealistic Lily (talk) 14:19, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Perhaps you would find it useful to review WP:MEDRS again, preferably before you edit the article. thanks. -Roxy the happy dog . wooF 19:29, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- That source seems to be a MEDRS, so I will add it in and keep it alongside the pseudoscience claim. Félix An (talk) 19:19, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Editing pseudoscientific claims
we need to look at the research clearly. There is evidence to support traditional chinese medicine is not psuedoscience. I do not mind adding skepticism at the end of the page. But to put it blatantly in the beginning is unfair to research that supports its efficacy from major scientific journal articles that are recent. The nature of science is revision. lets be civil please. In your optimism i will be removing the pseudoscientific part in the intro.— Preceding unsigned comment added by ToltecShaman (talk • contribs)
- Hello @ToltecShaman: Please read the archives of this talk page for the previous discussions on the subject. This is to avoid wasting time on subjects that have already been discussed multiple times and where consensus has been reached. Also, last I checked, vital energy and qi are as pseudo-scientific as it gets, so removing the notion from the intro (or the rest of the article) seems highly unlikely. --McSly (talk) 01:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- I have posted at Wikiproject Medicine's talkpage, asking that editors with experience in assessing the reliability of medical sources look at this discussion. Editors can review the changes that ToltecShaman was making in the article history to see the content and sourcing. Best Girth Summit (blether) 18:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
China is the primary consumer of illegal ivory
I'm not sure what ivory has to do a Chinese medicine. I have heard about rhino horn used as medicine, but not ivory. The source does not mention in Chinese medicine. --Zaurus (talk) 12:47, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
Is this a reliable source?
Hi, would https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0753332221000524 be considered a reliable secondary source for adding a bullet to the efficacy section about COVID-19? It is a compilation of previous results, and it is in Biomedicine & Pharmacotherapy. It seems legit to me but I'm not an expert on WP:MEDRS so I was reluctant to boldly add it, since I'm sure this is a controversial topic. Danstronger (talk) 22:41, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- Good question -- I don't see any other articles from the journal, but the Wikipedia article says it is published by Elsevier and peer reviewed.
- But my bigger fear is that the section is turning into a random listing, with no criteria as to what gets listed, and that is therefore not useful. See WP:NOTLINKFARM and WP:INDISCRIMINATE.
- So rather than run the risk of seeming to support or oppose particular treatments, I will propose cutting the list entirely, in favor of more general references. Does this make sense? ch (talk) 03:21, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
- I think the bulleted list should probably be replaced with something in paragraph form. Maybe something like what exists at Chinese_herbology#Efficacy? Although all that content probably doesn't need to be duplicated in both locations, and it can probably be compressed quite a bit. I.e. each individual review doesn't need its own sentence; they can all be grouped together and summarized. I would lean towards at least giving the specific positive results an explicit mention somewhere though. Danstronger (talk) 04:32, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Not a reliable medical source, far from it, in fact. Roxy the sceptical dog. wooF 08:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Care to elaborate on why you think that? It's a peer-reviewed third-party secondary review, in a reputable journal, as far as I can tell. Danstronger (talk) 13:24, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- ... from china ... -Roxy the sceptical dog. wooF 16:07, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Don't see that the journal is Chinese on the WP (stub) article Biomedicine & Pharmacotherapy or its site: https://www.sciencedirect.com/journal/biomedicine-and-pharmacotherapy , but my big concern is that it's bad policy to go with a single article in a big field.
- I think finding an overview or review article would be much better.ch (talk) 20:01, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- It sounds like Roxy's objection is that the authors are Chinese? Which feels more like bias than WP:MEDRS to me. This article is a systematic review, in the sense that they searched Pubmed, EMBASE, Cochrane library, etc. for articles testing CHM on covid-19, and then analyzed the results. Many RCTs are involved. Do you mean you'd rather have a review that covers CHM applied to all illnesses? I'm not sure if that exists. Danstronger (talk) 21:29, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Again, a good and real question, but my concern is not so much about this article, which now does sound reliable, as about the section. The section (which BTW also lists TCM) now is a list of individual treatments, not a discussion of CHM (Herbology) or TCM's overall efficacy. The problem is, as you rightly point out, that trying to describe overall efficacy doesn't make sense, any more than would a section on the overall efficacy of Western medicine. But the section now mixes (as does the whole article) items from "Medicine in Traditional China" with the 20th century invention, TCM (I am going to add a History section on Republican China to clarify the distinction).
- In the meantime, I continue to support Roxy the dog's insistence that Wikipedia cannot sanction or propagate pseudoscience, and that much of TCM falls into that category. But I also would support Danstronger in finding a way to handle this section that is better than a bulleted list and would include successes as well as failures (as the list does). A particular treatment may or may not be CHM/ TCM simply because it's developed in China, and not necessarily pseudoscience if called CHM/ TCM. That, however, get us into bigger questions that should be discussed elsewhere.
- I'd be surprised if there's not a summary or general article more recent than 2007! If not, is it OR to list articles on no explicable principle?ch (talk) 23:03, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- This Nature article from 2018 might be what you're looking for: https://www.nature.com/articles/d41586-018-06782-7 I could see replacing the list with some general negative statements based on that ("Critics argue that there is no physiological evidence that qi or meridians exist, and scant evidence that TCM works. There have been just a handful of cases in which Chinese herbal treatments have proved effective in randomized controlled clinical trials") followed by a paragraph description of the few specific positive results, e.g. turmeric, artemisinin, covid-19. Danstronger (talk) 13:44, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- A couple of things arise from Dan's comment. Despite what he says above, there have been no Chinese herbal treatments that have proved effective in clinical trials, the few specific positive examples claimed being unreliable Chinese sources. Dan's examples "fact checked" - Turmeric has no clinical benefits. - The only positive results of TCM on Covid have been Chinese. - Artemisinin's discovery and isolation was Nobel winning science not related to TCM garbology. - These have all been discussed before, and the Nature article noted above does not contradict what I have pointed out here. -Roxy the sceptical dog. wooF 15:51, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- This Nature article from 2018 might be what you're looking for: https://www.nature.com/articles/d41586-018-06782-7 I could see replacing the list with some general negative statements based on that ("Critics argue that there is no physiological evidence that qi or meridians exist, and scant evidence that TCM works. There have been just a handful of cases in which Chinese herbal treatments have proved effective in randomized controlled clinical trials") followed by a paragraph description of the few specific positive results, e.g. turmeric, artemisinin, covid-19. Danstronger (talk) 13:44, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- It sounds like Roxy's objection is that the authors are Chinese? Which feels more like bias than WP:MEDRS to me. This article is a systematic review, in the sense that they searched Pubmed, EMBASE, Cochrane library, etc. for articles testing CHM on covid-19, and then analyzed the results. Many RCTs are involved. Do you mean you'd rather have a review that covers CHM applied to all illnesses? I'm not sure if that exists. Danstronger (talk) 21:29, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- ... from china ... -Roxy the sceptical dog. wooF 16:07, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Care to elaborate on why you think that? It's a peer-reviewed third-party secondary review, in a reputable journal, as far as I can tell. Danstronger (talk) 13:24, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Not a reliable medical source, far from it, in fact. Roxy the sceptical dog. wooF 08:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- I think the bulleted list should probably be replaced with something in paragraph form. Maybe something like what exists at Chinese_herbology#Efficacy? Although all that content probably doesn't need to be duplicated in both locations, and it can probably be compressed quite a bit. I.e. each individual review doesn't need its own sentence; they can all be grouped together and summarized. I would lean towards at least giving the specific positive results an explicit mention somewhere though. Danstronger (talk) 04:32, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- It looks like an exceedingly dubious source. It makes quite a lot of extraordinary assertions; the first one I checked failed verification. The authors write that "During the SARS epidemic, TCM played an important role in reducing mortality and alleviating patients' symptoms". This is supported by a citation to this paper in the Lancet, which would be a fine source, except that it does not mention TCM's role in reducing mortality. It doesn't even mention TCM at all, as far as I can see, the only treatments discussed in the paper are antivirals, antibiotics, corticosteroids, continual renal replacemet therapy, and various types of oxygen support. Very dodgy - I wouldn't support using a source like this to support any assertion, let alone a biomedical one. Girth Summit (blether) 16:28, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Related discussion
Guy Macon (talk) 19:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
safety - irrelevant paragraph on covid-19
At the end of the safety section, there is a paragraph on bat droppings that doesn't seem to have anything to do with traditional chinese medicine. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.130.46.152 (talk) 16:22, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
- According to the citation ([4]) it does. Danstronger (talk) 18:13, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Inacurrate understanding and description of Chinese medicine.
The vague claim that Chinese medicine is pseudoscience based on an article that ignores the overwhelming research that many countries around the world including China, Korea, Japan, and the U.S. have done in treating diseases, and is therefore biased and opinion based. Opinions of this nature only demonstrate the lack of knowledge of this medicine the writers of this opinion have, and should be dismissed.
Here is an example of TCM treating Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26275654/
Treating Cardiomyopathy https://journals.lww.com/md-journal/Fulltext/2020/07020/Traditional_Chinese_medicine_on_treating_dilated.38.aspx Chinese medicine believes that the pathogenesis of DCM is due to insufficiency of natural endowment, yang deficiency, and treatment based on the principle of supplementing qi and benefiting yang. TCM combined with conventional western medicine can effectively improve ejection fraction, reduce left ventricular end diastolic diameter, and improve exercise tolerance.[18] Studies have shown that components of Radix Astragali can reduce myocardial inflammation and fibrosis, and protect heart function and morphological abnormalities.[19] In recent years, due to the extensive development of clinical trials, the vigorous promotion of Chinese medicine has been applied to the clinic. TCM may be used as a complementary and alternative approach to primary and secondary prevention of cardiovascular disease.[20] TCM has significant effects in treating heart diseases such as heart failure, arrhythmia, and coronary heart disease.
Traditional Chinese medicine is effective and an object of much research. Traditional Chinese medicine pharmacology is a study of its own. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2607:fea8:8481:9000:1c19:e36a:ad58:839c (talk • contribs)
- Read WP:MEDRS. Hemiauchenia (talk) 11:59, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
- Even if TCM did indeed help, that does not validate the entirety of TCM, or the underlying debunked concepts and philosophy. WIKINIGHTS talk 15:55, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
Even if there are "underlying debunked concepts and philosophy", that does not invalidate the comment by the above poster. Use your critical thinking skills. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.130.46.152 (talk) 16:27, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
- It's important to remember that Western "debunking" of traditional medicinal practices comes from a colonial project of using traditional medicines for profit.
- https://liftmode.wordpress.com/2017/03/10/pharmaceutical-colonialism-3-ways-that-western-medicine-takes-from-indigenous-communities/ 2A01:4B00:84DD:2000:B9C5:458A:7AF2:CCA0 (talk) 12:40, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- The above article is from an unreliable source. Here are some reliable sources discussing the colonial roots of biases in favour of Western medicine and tendency to discount other medical practices:
- https://jme.bmj.com/content/46/4/265.abstract
- http://www.scielo.org.za/scielo.php?script=sci_arttext&pid=S2520-98682018000400008
- https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1111/j.1365-2923.2007.02991.x
- https://muse.jhu.edu/article/4141Ratsalad99 (talk) 14:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- If it does not work, it does not work. None of that is a fault of Western people, nor of colonialism. It is a matter of epistemology. The difference is that mainstream medicine has said farewell to childish superstition, be it Christian, Jewish, Medieval European, or Greek-Roman. The matter whether TCM works better than placebo cannot be solved through crying "Political correctness!" Western scientists have learned that magic and superstition do not work, and this is by no means a colonialist claim. That political ideology could replace empiric-analytical research is the peak of irrationality. Postmodernism in medicine seems to boil down to: there are no facts, and every claimed fact is a political-ideological POV. You are conflating between evidence-based medical consensus and ideological propaganda.
- You might try to reply with Artemisinin, but TCM is about boiled Artemisia, which has 0 (zero) therapeutic effect. tgeorgescu (talk) 05:00, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
Intro revision
Discussion of TCM's status as being considered a pseudoscience is well discussed under the 'critique' heading. Perhaps the intro would be better suited to focusing on describing TCM, its history and usage, and quotations from journals discussing and evaluating the practice of TCM should remain under the 'critique' heading. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ratsalad99 (talk • contribs) 19:48, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- The purpose of the intro is to summarize the entirety of the article (see WP:LEAD), and in our case, that would include the criticism section as well. --McSly (talk) 20:12, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- Good point! Perhaps the discursive sentence could be moved to lower down in the intro alongside the mention of wildlife smuggling, or the uncited description of vital energy as pseudoscientific, rather than being the second sentence of the intro. This would reflect its mention in the article and leave space for description of the subject to lead the intro. Ratsalad99 (talk) 20:20, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- As the most important thing about TCM is that it doesn't work, I suggest not changing the lead's first paragraph. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 20:39, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- This is a point of view and not neutral Ratsalad99 (talk) 02:00, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- On Wikipedia, neutrality means that we accurately reflect the best sources, not that we take no position at all. See WP:FALSEBALANCE. - MrOllie (talk) 12:58, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- I would direct you to the last article linked under "Inacurrate understanding and description of Chinese medicine" heading on this talk page. Represents a well-documented opposing point of view. Ratsalad99 (talk) 13:30, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- A blog post from a company that sells snake-oil 'health supplements'? Far, far below our sourcing standards. Please have a look at WP:MEDRS if you'd like to contribute to medical topics on Wikipedia. - MrOllie (talk) 13:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- Ooooh yes that is not a great source to be using, thanks for pointing that out! I've added some sources from more reliable publications below the original comment.
- Continuing along these lines however, I would argue that since the quotation from Nature in the lead paragraph of the article is an editorial, it would not pass the reliable medical sources standard either. Or at the very least, if it could be considered to reside in a grey area, perhaps it is reliable enough for inclusion in the article, but not in the lead paragraph.
- At the very least, I would recommend identifying the source of the quotation, as well as perhaps the author. Since it is a single person's point of view, the passive voice used to deliver the quote is misleading. Ratsalad99 (talk) 14:53, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- In support of this claim, the suggestion from Wikipedia:Reliable sources is that "Editorial commentary...written by the editors of the publication (editorials)...are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author, but are rarely reliable for statements of fact." The wording of the lede, however, suggests this claim as a statement of fact. Therefore, I also suggest that this reference and the associated statement be moved to the bottom paragraph of the lead, together with the animal ethics issues, or to the Critique section.
- Minor addition to the reply above, this reference was not used as a medical source or biomedical information, so it falls under Wikipedia:Reliable sources instead of Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine), and does follow the guidelines. Thus it should indeed be reliable enough for inclusion in the article. GavinXLu (talk) 03:57, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
- A blog post from a company that sells snake-oil 'health supplements'? Far, far below our sourcing standards. Please have a look at WP:MEDRS if you'd like to contribute to medical topics on Wikipedia. - MrOllie (talk) 13:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- I would direct you to the last article linked under "Inacurrate understanding and description of Chinese medicine" heading on this talk page. Represents a well-documented opposing point of view. Ratsalad99 (talk) 13:30, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- On Wikipedia, neutrality means that we accurately reflect the best sources, not that we take no position at all. See WP:FALSEBALANCE. - MrOllie (talk) 12:58, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- This is a point of view and not neutral Ratsalad99 (talk) 02:00, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- As the most important thing about TCM is that it doesn't work, I suggest not changing the lead's first paragraph. -Roxy the grumpy dog. wooF 20:39, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- Good point! Perhaps the discursive sentence could be moved to lower down in the intro alongside the mention of wildlife smuggling, or the uncited description of vital energy as pseudoscientific, rather than being the second sentence of the intro. This would reflect its mention in the article and leave space for description of the subject to lead the intro. Ratsalad99 (talk) 20:20, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
Revised and augmented lead sentence
We've discussed on this Talk Page, for instance HERE, how to make clear the distinction between "medicine in traditional China", which was a wide and conflicting variety of thoughts and practices, and "Traditional Chinese Medicine", which was invented in the twentieth century, and which is the target of the "pseudo-science" label. So it's not quite right to say TCM is a "branch" of traditional Chinese medicine, though it is entirely appropriate to call it pseudo-science. So my edit is intended to make this distinction clear.ch (talk) 03:41, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
- What is traditional China? --Hob Gadling (talk) 07:44, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks, Hob Gadling. If a question can hit a nail on the head, yours is one that does it! “Traditional China” is outmoded, unanalytical, misleading, generally avoided among careful writers, but practically inescapable. As explained at Discovering History in China, it gained popularity after WWII as a way of labeling anything that was not “modern”. In practical terms, it sometimes meant "them", not "us", sometimes “old,” “back then,” “before anybody can remember,” or in the case of China, “before 1949" or sometimes “before 1911.” The article History of China uses Ancient, Imperial, and Modern, which is a little but not much better.
- Since Wikipedia's strength is editing by non-scholars, articles grew by accretion, not planning. There was no stopping "traditional" and now no practical way to weed it out. Just enter “Traditional Chinese” into the Wikipedia search box at the top right of this page and stand back.
- Titling this article “Traditional Chinese Medicine” (in capitals) causes tremendous but understandable confusion, since “traditional medicine” did not exist (as such) in “traditional China.” If you can read Chinese, you will see that the article’s Chinese name is “Chinese medicine,” which is what TCM is called in Chinese. TCM is certainly important in today's China, but it's different from "medicine in China before 1949" -- OK, for convenience "Medicine in traditional China."
- We should work out a lede sentence that will explain this to an ordinary reader.ch (talk) 04:04, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
Biases
Very subjective description, I advise someone edit this 114.42.9.159 (talk) 09:59, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
- Which part? The part where we quote secondary scientific literature instead of personal anecdotes? --Hob Gadling (talk) 11:14, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
Commercial web sites as references
The section about Tui na massage is sourced to a commercial web site, which I believe is not reliable. The citation also falsely claims it is a journal article. Are any better references available? Are any other sources also of low quality? ScienceFlyer (talk) 06:49, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
- I agree, and the page linked doesn’t really support the text it follows; it seems to have been added to pre-existing text in this edit. Looking at the main article for tui na, perhaps the sources cited in the lead there would be better places to find a basic description of the practice. I’ve replaced it with the Ernst book cited there. Brunton (talk) 11:31, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Is there a distinction between Traditional Chinese medicine and ancient Chinese medicine?
Alexysun (talk) 00:14, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- Yup, TCM was basically produced by Maoism. ACM was very diverse and sometimes contradictory (ancient Chinese doctors disagreed upon many issues, sometimes fundamental). tgeorgescu (talk) 00:18, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- So why isn't there a separate article? Alexysun (talk) 00:20, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- Yup, History of Chinese medicine redirects here, but technically is a different subject. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:34, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- So why isn't there a separate article? Alexysun (talk) 00:20, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
New Section
For Dao Yao -art of combining different herbs needed.
~~Ted~~ 2607:FEA8:4A2:4100:AD3B:1C68:D290:AD61 (talk) 08:17, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
Do you think restructuring the lead like this is better?
I decided to restructure the lead section by grouping the introduction, history, and criticisms together, rather than having them scattered. (Please note that I did not remove any of the original text.) User:MrOllie swiftly reverted my edits, so I assume he did not like it, but what do all you you think? https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Traditional_Chinese_medicine&oldid=1146044532 Félix An (talk) 13:09, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
- Pushing the most important context (that it isn't based on logic or science) to the end isn't an improvement. MrOllie (talk) 13:52, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
- Anyone else? Félix An (talk) 06:13, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
- Agree with MrOllie. --Hob Gadling (talk) 15:19, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
Any other opinions? Félix An (talk) 11:23, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
- I think it reads better as it is now, so I too agree with MrOllie. Girth Summit (blether) 12:00, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
- Reading this attempted "restructuring" is painfully dreadful. The lead sentence is redundant (could we quote it in MOS:REDUNDANCY instead of "Pakistani–Iraqi relations are the relations between Pakistan and Iraq."?), and TCM's empirical ineffectiveness is buried in the last paragraph. Keahapana (talk) 19:27, 31 March 2023 (UTC)