Talk:Dreamscaperers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 20:22, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Will look. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 20:22, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Afraid I'm gonna have to fail this one. The prose is clunky and I saw right off the bat that the article uses lots of unreliable sources. TV.com, IMDB, TV Tropes, and Zimbio.com to name a few.

Two notes:

1. During the scene where Bill is summoned he strikes out a number of images on his body, like John F. Kennedy, UFOs, the Aztec calendar, the Apollo moon landing, Stonehenge, Giza pyramids, crop circles, etc. continuing the show's scoffing of conspiracy theories. Original research. You can't cite the episode for something that happens in it. The Variety link at the end doesn't mention this episode at all.
2. The episode got a 9.8 user rating on TV.com and 5 stars on Zimbio. It also received 4 stars general rating on Common Sense Media and 8.4/10 from the Internet Movie Database. Not reliable sources.

Better luck next time. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 20:39, 11 October 2013 (UTC)