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27 November 2021

• 17:1217:12, 27 November 2021 diff hist +16 Anne Robinson No edit summary

15 January 2020

• 14:1414:14, 15 January 2020 diff hist +1 Romani language →Cases: corrected spelling of dativ to dative.

31 December 2019

• 21:3521:35, 31 December 2019 diff hist +1 What's So Amazing About Grace? →Content: Corrected Yancey quotation at start of section from "I became a write" to "I became a writer."

30 December 2019

• 02:0802:08, 30 December 2019 diff hist 0 Lolita →Literary memoir: Corrected two misspellings of "Nafasi" to correct form Nafisi.

15 November 2019

• 13:0713:07, 15 November 2019 diff hist +38 Eckankar →Ceremonies and rites: Corrected dates in 3rd paragraph to reflect contents of source cited.

9 October 2019

• 14:4214:42, 9 October 2019 diff hist +4 Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn →The Holodomor
• 14:4114:41, 9 October 2019 diff hist +16 Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn →The Holodomor: provided link to Holodomor
• 14:3614:36, 9 October 2019 diff hist +29 Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn →Legacy: Added "in Worcester, Massachusetts," to locate the Solzhenitsyn Center, since he lived in several different countries.

21 June 2019

• 14:5214:52, 21 June 2019 diff hist +18 Origin story In 1st para., replaced "study" with "interest and complexity".

18 March 2019

• 21:3421:34, 18 March 2019 diff hist +5 Caning in Singapore →Offences punishable by caning: 'molest' changed to 'molestation' -- maintaining parallelism with other nouns in list

6 February 2019

• 14:0114:01, 6 February 2019 diff hist −26 Vocative case Deleted "Tamil" in the second paragraph -- not an Indo-European language.

23 May 2018

• 00:2700:27, 23 May 2018 diff hist +25 Beautiful Creatures (2013 film) →Plot: 3rd paragraph -- this sentence is incoherent -- revised it and divided it into shorter sentences: "She foresees that Lena will become an even more powerful caster, since the moon will bring out more energy and will be considered as the most powerful solstice and intends for Lena to use her newfound power to purge the Earth of humans, leaving casters to rule in their wake."

21 March 2018

• 23:4223:42, 21 March 2018 diff hist 0 Blickling homilies →Origin and audience of the collection: improved sense of the first sentence, according to the explanation in paragraph -- changed "homilies of their intended" to "homilies or their intended"

11 March 2018

• 16:5916:59, 11 March 2018 diff hist −1 Pwyll Pendefig Dyfed →Synopsis: In 2nd para. beginning "Some time later," changed "none" to "one" to improve sense/correct possible typo.

5 March 2018

• 17:3117:31, 5 March 2018 diff hist +16 Old English literature →Saints' lives: added "in promoting it" to the sentence beginning "The cult of the True Cross."

24 June 2017

• 14:2414:24, 24 June 2017 diff hist +35 Galway Kinnell added spouse name Barbara K. Bristol from NY Times obit https://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/30/books/galway-kinnell-poet-who-went-his-own-way-dies-at-87.html

30 May 2017

• 18:0818:08, 30 May 2017 diff hist −2 Storm King School →Black Rock Consortium: punctuation -- removed unnecessary " " from around the word programs.
• 18:0718:07, 30 May 2017 diff hist −1 Storm King School →Geography: punctuation -- removed comma after "among them"
• 18:0518:05, 30 May 2017 diff hist −1 Storm King School grammar: changed "faculties" to "faculty"

9 April 2017

• 19:1919:19, 9 April 2017 diff hist +280 David Salo Added "Salo on Conlanging" section

8 March 2017

• 21:2521:25, 8 March 2017 diff hist +1 Chris Payne Gilbert grammar: changed sent. beginning "His role ..." to "His roles ..."

9 February 2017

• 02:5802:58, 9 February 2017 diff hist −1 Hyde School (Maine) →Description: Removed comma in first paragraph after "Gauld" -- no comma should separate subject and verb.

4 August 2016

• 20:0320:03, 4 August 2016 diff hist +19 Bellver Castle improved grammar of sentence "First serving as the residence ..."

30 July 2016

• 18:2418:24, 30 July 2016 diff hist +38 Isaac Bonewits →Contributions to Neopaganism: added link to ABCDEF

23 July 2016

• 18:1118:11, 23 July 2016 diff hist +4 Isorhapontin added link to "stilbenoid" in first sentence Tag: Visual edit: Switched

12 February 2016

• 14:5214:52, 12 February 2016 diff hist −1 Roswell (TV series) →Season one: last line, 2nd para: changed "was" to "is" to match narrative tense.