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* There is a lot of errors with comma placement throughout the story.
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* There are a lot of errors with comma placement throughout the story.
 
* Steelgrave looks far different in the illustration he appears in from how he's described in-story, being based mostly on the Steelgrave toy's design and colors.
 
* Steelgrave looks far different in the illustration he appears in from how he's described in-story, being based mostly on the Steelgrave toy's design and colors.
 
* On page 18, one of the sentences in the second paragraph ("From what Ritash‟s troops had gathered, even the mechanical Predacons could become inebriated") begins with an "<" symbol.
 
* On page 18, one of the sentences in the second paragraph ("From what Ritash‟s troops had gathered, even the mechanical Predacons could become inebriated") begins with an "<" symbol.
 
* Ritash is described as having purple colored fur, but is colored as green in the illustration he features in.
 
* Ritash is described as having purple colored fur, but is colored as green in the illustration he features in.
* On page 33, in paragraph 1, the sentence "Megatron did not - does not only have military cunning or strength on his side, he also has charisma" should read "not only does he having military cunning or strenght on his side."
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* On page 33, in paragraph 1, the sentence "Megatron did not - does not only have military cunning or strength on his side, he also has charisma" should read "not only does he having military cunning or strength on his side."
 
* One of the paragraphs on page 41 is repeated.
 
* One of the paragraphs on page 41 is repeated.
   

Revision as of 16:27, 13 February 2018

Transformers Timelines
text story
Descent into Evil
Razor's Edge group shot.jpg
There's fighting on the left
And marching on the right
Don't look up in the sky
You're gonna die of fright!
"The Razor's Edge"
Publisher Transformers Collectors' Club
First published July 6, 2007
Writers Benson Yee from a story by Pete Sinclair and Benson Yee
Pencils Jake Isenberg
Inks Jake Isenberg
Colors Thomas Deer
Continuity Beast Wars continuity
Page count 45pp + 1 page prologue

Climb this high she looks beautiful
Like a child I feel tears.
And I want to scream.
You know what I mean cause this is hurting no one.
An erazor of love.

Contents

Synopsis

Prologue

Airazor and Optimus Primal fly to the scene of Megatron's latest scheme: a orbital weapons satellite that when launched, will be able to fire on any location on the planet. Airazor, having only come online a few weeks prior, has doubts about herself, but leaves them aside, focusing on the mission. Cheetor and Rhinox have already arrived, trading fire with the ground based Predacons. Scorponok attempts to sneak up on the Maximals, but Airazor manages to take him out of the fight. Primal commends her work, but is blasted out of the sky by Terrorsaur and Waspinator, the former wanting revenge for his humiliating defeat at Airazor's hands. Airazor performs a swift divebomb, turning parallel to the ground just fast enough, causing Waspinator to crash. Terrorsaur, however, also manages to turn, so Airazor leads him into some nearby rocks, turning 90 degrees at the last second, and causing the reptilian Predacon to crash. Airazor heads over to Megatron, the Predacon leader standing at the control panel to launch the satellite. Airazor begins to fire on him. Megatron absorbs most of the blasts, and when Airazor is distracted by Cheetor and Rhinox setting off landmines set up by Tarantulas, Megatron blasts her out of the sky. Falling to the ground, and with Dinobot and Tigatron still racing from the Axalon, Airazor feels her confidence slip away. Megatron grabs her with his dinosaur jaws, and as she begins to slip into stasis lock, she remembers something Dinobot told her: for a warrior to find true strength, they must know themselves. Trouble is, all Airazor knows for sure is her name...

Chapter One

Wing Saber wakes up in a small dark room. A Maximal spy, she had been sent to observe a Predacon operation, and nearly completed her task before being found and attacked. With blaster marks all over her, her optics on the fritz, and her weaponry removed, she finds herself at the mercy of a Predacon named Steelgrave. Steelgrave is impressed by her stealth, and attempts to question the Maximal. When the initial questioning reveals nothing, Steelgrave unleashes his torture weapons. Wing Saber, thinking fast, distracts her torturer by asking him if he knows that one can alter their transformation subroutine. Before the annoyed Predacon can stop her, she rotates her wings to vehicle mode position, cutting her energon bonds, and flips herself backwards. Steelgrave is knocked back by the chair, allowing Wing Saber time to activate an old welding drone, which rushes at the Predacon. Wing Saber rips the wires out of the door's control panel, and runs as quickly as she can. Stopping at a corner, she listens as two Predacons, Bolar and Sawtooth, talk about how annoying they think Steelgrave is. With the Predacon torturer not far behind, she takes her chances and jumps in front of the two Predacons. Pretending to be Steelgrave's subordinate, she announces to him that Bolar and Sawtooth were mocking him. Momentarily distracted, and with tensions raised, the three Predacons begin to fight one another. Wing Saber takes her chance, grabbing Bolar's gun, and blasts a hole through a wall. Unfortunately, the room on other side of that wall is filled with Predacons. Wing Saber quickly rips out the spare power pack on the weapon, throwing and shooting it, and takes advantage of the ensuing chaos to turn into vehicle mode and fly out of the base. Wing Saber deactivates the Chromia 10's cloaking device, and activates the ships preprogrammed flight path to Cybertron, whisking the Maximal to safety.

Chapter Two

On the planet Roliak, Crossblades, a Maximal, faces up against a group of twenty three rogue Predacons. Using her arsenal of replicated Great War-era weapons, she manages to cut the group down to four. One of the Predacons runs away, and the other three are cut down by Crossblades's partner, Stiletto. After the battle, Crossblades reflects on the current affairs; with the Maximal Elders and Tripredacus Council preparing to ratify a peace treaty known as the Pax Cybertronia, all that remains are various rebel groups of Predacons, like the ones in the J'kozian sector that the two Maximals are currently in. Crossblades receives a transmission from the Maximal starship Defiant, telling her that she and Stiletto are to rendezvous with the Chromia 10 and its captain. Collecting her weaponry that litters the battlefield from the fighting of the past few days, Crossblades reflects that while Stiletto is only four stellar cycles old, distant and aloof as a result of her training, she herself is far older, having been brought online during the last days of the Great War as part of the first run of Maximals. This has caused her to have a great respect for her predecessors, and has influence her collection of weaponry. Before long, the Chromia 10 arrives, and the two depart, ready to meet their new commander.

Chapter Three

The Tripredacus Council gathers to discuss the rogue Predacon sect's actions in the J'Kozian sector of space. Based off plans made in the final stages of the Great War before the Predacon's defeat, the Predacons have stopped on the planet Nibari. X-ray scans show that the Nibarians have advanced to the point of creating primitive robots. With the Pax Cybertronian still in the process of being written, and the Decepticons having all but abandoned them to their fate, the Tripredacus Council agree that this operation must be stopped, lest the Maximals retaliate. Cicadacon has leaked the images onto the Cybertron undernet, and the three, cautiously optimistic, make plans to ensure that the resources end up under their control...

Chapter Four

Wing Saber, still reeling from her injuries twenty Mega Cycles previous, finds her new charges somewhat odd, unnerved by Stiletto's quiet nature and Crossblades' strange accent. Still, deciding that their performance should outweigh any presumptions on her part, Wing Saber greets the two, and has them prepare for an incoming transmission from Maximal Command. An unknown voice, standard to Maximal operations, comes through, and sends images that Maximal Command have suppressed from the general public. The images show the the planet Nibari, and the subjugation of the native species by the Predacons to build factories and plants. Maximal Command believes that the factories are being used by the Predacons to build non-sparked drones. Wing Saber spots Steelgrave among the Predacons, and feels a wave of revulsion at the site of her tormentor. The voice explains that Steelgrave seems to be in command of the Predacon forces. The Chromia 10 is given a mission to gather intelligence at Nibari and to report back to command for further instructions. The signal terminating, Wing Saber informs her crew of her doubts at Steelgrave's abilities, and her suspicions that something more sinister is happening here...

Chapter Five

On the Nibari continent Sileth, Ritash reflects on his race's cruel fate. With most of the Nibari military and resistance destroyed, all that remained were small pockets of resistance. Indeed, until a short time ago, Ritash was a mere soldier, and now is in charge of a group of twenty three, many of whom are civilians. Ritash is roused from his thoughts when he hears galloping, but is pleased when the sound is identified as Avish, a scout who was sent out several weeks prior. Avish reports that the Predacons had set up their headquarters in the city of Ro'kar, converting the robotics and computer plants into their own, and taking over the businesses and repurposing buildings for entertainment. Ritash is furious, the robotics plant having originally being designed to create explorer robots, but Avish's report does give him an idea...

At the Predacon's headquarters, an inebriated Steelgrave relishes barely coherent tales of his greatness. The robot secretly in charge watches them on the security system, exasperated with the fools they must work with. Meanwhile, on the outskirts of the city, Ritash and his comrades stealthily observe the Predacon's defenses. An older Nibarian, Arex, has informed them that the robotics factory was built on top of a church that had secret tunnels below it. Two of those tunnels remain, and Ritash plans to use these to ambush the drunken Predacons. Ritash, observing the buildings, regrets that he couldn't have saved more, including his family, but resolves to end the Predacon's invasion.

Back inside the bar, Steelgrave admires the female bartenders and servers, and demands his special. When a Predacon falls unconscious on him, he kicks him back, and turns around to find an unknown concoction in front of him. His drunkenness overriding his better judgement, Steelgrave downs the drink. Soon, the Predacon begins to notice many of the Predacons have entered stasis lock, and when his computer attempts to initiate Stasis Lock itself, he overrides it. Facing the barmaids, he watches their holographic disguises disengage, and recognizes Wing Saber, and her fists knock the weakened Steelgrave unconscious. Knowing that the alert guards at the factory won't as easily fooled by Crossblades' hologram, Wing Saber cautions against Stiletto against killing them, not wanting to alert the remaining Predacons. When her two subordinates ask her what her plan is, she doesn't answer, instead observing a flock of birds above and the dirty rooftops, which give her an idea...

Chapter Six

Deadeye, one of the Predacon guards at the factory, ha no qualms with his current duty, preferring it over the front lines. Originally having reservations about Steelgrave and "the Leader"'s plans, but eventually turned his position around, ready to guard any acquisitions the Predacons made. Having been to many planets on his career, Deadeye regarded Nibari as entirely unremarkable, covered with disgusting organic life...one of which decides to defecate on him at that moment. He radios Cutter, his partner, to take over his position for a bit. With the organic waste dripping down to his shoulders and legs, Deadeye resist the urge to fire off randomly, and radios Cutter to hurry up. Deadeye runs inside as Cutter takes his place, eager to get rid of the sludge. High up in the sky, Wing Saber is pleased, her plan to distract the guards by gathering the defecation of the local bird into Crossblades' liquid nitrogen gun and firing having worked. Landing right in front of "Cutter," another guard radios in, questioning what the noise was. "Cutter" dismisses it as them tripping, and the hologram around them disengages to reveal Stiletto underneath, Cutter having been taken out by her when he was coming to replace Deadeye. Stiletto hacks into a nearby maintenance panel, and in 15 cycles, confirms Maximal Command's suspicions. Unsure of what to do, Wing Saber peers down at the drones; nearing completion, she believes there won't be enough time to call for reinforcements before they're finished. Wing Saber requests to have access to the panel, but just as she connects, a deep rumble shakes every other Cybertronian in the building to the ground. Ritash and his fellow soldiers initiate their attack, but the battle goes poorly for them, half of them already dead by the time Wing Saber finishes with the panel. Ritash and the others set up bombs around the factory, taking out much of the factory's machinery. Gathering up some weapons, the Nibarians retreat, and Wing Saber and the other Maximals jump into the fight, distracting the Predacons so the Nibarians can escape. Crossblades and Stiletto use their blades to cut down the Predacons, while Wing Saber strafes them in vehicle mode. More Predacons rush in from the outside, and Wing Saber uses her missile launcher to take out most of them, Stiletto cutting down the rest. The largest Predacon, Thrasher, attempts to use his bigger size and six arms to take down Crossblades, but her speed and weapons send him into stasis lock. By this point, most of the Nibarians have escaped, but as Ritash covers the last of them, a large blast takes out the ceiling, sending the Nibarian unconscious. The Maximals stand in shock, the source of the blast having come from the original leader of the Decepticons: Megatron! Revealing himself to be the true leader behind this operation, Megatron prepares to blast the already fleeing Maximals, but a bomb from inside the underground tunnels goes off, distracting the Decepticon long enough for the Maximals to grab Ritash, and Wing Saber blasts part of the ceiling for good measure, the refuse falling on Megatron. Retreating, the only thing Wing Saber can think to do now was to regroup and find safety...

Chapter Seven

The next morning, Ritash awakens in the wilderness, and when he sees the Maximals, he instinctively backs away, believing them to be Predacons. Wing Saber calms the Nibarian, and ensures that most of his people escaped, and she and the others are here to help. Ritash, exhausted, takes a moment to grieve; both Avish and Arex were killed in the fight, and the Nibarian feel as though he has failed as a leader. Wing Saber reassures him, and the Maximals take Ritash back to his people at their regrouping point, promising them that they will stop the Predacons. Returning to the Chromia 10 for repairs and to plan for their next attack. Knowing they couldn't take Megatron head on, Wing Saber decides to appeal to his one weakness: arrogance.

Chapter Eight

Four days later, Megatron watches as the factory, now fully repaired, produces hundreds of drones. Steelgrave, reduced in rank because of his incompetence, reports that the operations is ready for plan two: the construction of warship. Megatron authorizes the advancement, but the Chromia 10 blasts a hole through the building Megatron is in. The three Maximals challenge Megatron to a trial by combat, the loser of which has to leave the planet for good, as in accordance with ancient Cybertronian law. Megatron challenges this, the law stating that the combat is one on one only, but the Maximals note that due to their smaller and weaker bodies, the couldn't possibly fight Megatron on their own, and suggest him to be a coward. Taking the bait, Megatron agrees to meet the three in a crater seventy kilometers east. The Maximal ship cloaks and takes off, leaving the angry Megatron to thrash one of his troops and skulk off.

Chapter Nine

The next day, Ritash and the Nibarians watch from afar as the combatants enter the crater. The combatants greet each other, and immediately being to fight. Concentrating his efforts on Crossblades, the largest of the Maximals, Megatron does not even notice the superfast Stiletto, who grabs a gun thrown at her by Crossblades. Megatron avoids Crossblades's shots, but his gyroscopic circuits are taken out by Stiletto. Narrowly avoiding extensive damage from Wing Saber's plasma missile. Megatron grabs his energy sword out, and lunges at the Maximals. His larger size proves disadvantageous, and Crossblades uses her own blades to slash at the Decepticon. Unleashing his morning star, he shatters Crossblades' sword, but is briefly blinded. The Maximals go all in, and when they briefly disengage, Crossblades realizes that the real Megatron would have never taken this much damage. Before Crossblades can elaborate, Megatron knocks her and Stilleto into stasis, and ripping off one of Wing Saber's legs. As Megatron walks over, she maxes out her payload, and strikes Megatron in the shoulder. Strangling her, Megatron tell her she should be proud, having lasted longer then many, but Wing Saber simply smiles, pointing out the area she blasted at, revealing a different shoulder underneath! Blasting away more of the exo-suit, Wing Saber proclaims that this is not the genuine Megatron. As "Megatron" threatens her, the ground rumbles, and the drones arrive at the edge of the crater. "Megatron" believes the drones have arrived to witness him, but Ritash and the others gather along side the drones, with them having been reprogrammed to serve the Nibarians. The drones overwhelm the Predacons, and "Megatron" is blasted until they fall, the exo-suit destroyed to a point where their real identity is revealed: the ancient Decepticon Flamewar! Wing Saber explains to the fallen Decepticon that when she originally infiltrated the factory, she set up a sub-routine that would allow for the Nibarians to take the control of them. Flamewar demands to know what they plan to do to her, and Wing Saber obliges, delightfully telling her that she will be taken back to Cybertron for trial. Crossblades and Stiletto return online, and Wing Saber informs them that she plans to remain partners with the two. Ritash thanks to the Maximals for their help and tell them they plan to use the Drone to help rebuild their broken world.

Epilogue

Back on prehistoric Earth, determination builds up in Airazor, and she fires off three arrows, two of them striking Megatron, and another bouncing off the rock and hitting a button on the control panel, starting a shut down sequence. In pain, Megatron lets go of Airazor to remove the arrow from his knee, and Airazor rushes to the control panel. Quickly typing in control commands, the Predacons begin to fire on her, but Dinobot and Tigatron arrive just in time to to distract the Predacons. Finishing, she flies off and yells at her comrades to get down, as the weapons satellite explodes, unleashing a shockwave that knocks the remaining Predacons unconscious. Airazor, Dinobot, and Tigatron gather up their fallen comrades. Airazor does not know what compelled her, but for now, she's content that she's managed to stop another of Megatron's schemes.

Featured characters

(Numbers indicate order of appearance.)

Maximals Predacons Nibarians

Notes

Continuity notes

  • The events of the prologue and epilogue take place during the Beast Wars cartoon, two weeks after "The Spark". Several events from the episode are mentioned, including Cheetor giving up one of his parts for Airazor, and Terrorsaur being defeated by her.
  • The exact continuity "The Razor's Edge" is in is...confusing, to say the least. With the appearance of Flamewar, and Airazor/Wing Saber having the same pre-Earth design she had in "Dawn of Future's Past", this story was initially thought to be a sequel to "Descent into Evil" and/or a prequel to "Dawn of Future's Past". Pete Sinclair, however, would state that "Descent into Evil" wasn't in the same universe as "Dawn of Future's Past" (despite no reason for it not to be), leading many to simply consider this story a "Dawn of Future's Past" prequel, set before "Theft of the Golden Disk". This perspective remained in effect for several years until, in early 2018, Jesse Wittenrich confirmed that "The Razor's Edge" was, in fact, written to be not just a "Descent into Evil" sequel, but also a potential bridging story between that and "Dawn of Future's Past", all along.[1][2] He further explained that the original reason for separating "Descent into Evil" from "Dawn of Future's Past" was a desire by the latter story's authors to make it be the definitive Beast Wars prequel, a fresh start not bogged down by any related stories that could have potentially interfered with the Beast Wars backstory conceived by the cartoon's original creators.[3] In any case, "The Razor's Edge" is set near the very end of the Great War, with the Pax Cybertronia still being written.
  • The epilogue to the story makes no sense without the prologue which was published separately in Hasbro Transformers Collectors' Club #14.
  • Assuing that this is in continuity with Descent into Evil, Flamewar was last seen being recovered by Predacons in Intimidation Game, offering her a job under Megatron. No mention is made of the Predacon Megatron in the flashback portions, and with Flamewar's desire for a Decepticon to be in charge, it seems unlikely she is working for him.

Transformers references

Real world references

  • Many of the Predacons in-story are based off of characters from the Tomy Starriors toyline. In particular, there is:
    • Steelgrave, who has his Starriors counterpart's chest weapon.
    • Bolar, who has his Starriors counterpart's bola.
    • Sawtooth (Who is not named in-story).
    • Deadeye.
    • Cutter shares his silver and blue coloration the similarly named Cut-Up

Errors

  • There are a lot of errors with comma placement throughout the story.
  • Steelgrave looks far different in the illustration he appears in from how he's described in-story, being based mostly on the Steelgrave toy's design and colors.
  • On page 18, one of the sentences in the second paragraph ("From what Ritash‟s troops had gathered, even the mechanical Predacons could become inebriated") begins with an "<" symbol.
  • Ritash is described as having purple colored fur, but is colored as green in the illustration he features in.
  • On page 33, in paragraph 1, the sentence "Megatron did not - does not only have military cunning or strength on his side, he also has charisma" should read "not only does he having military cunning or strength on his side."
  • One of the paragraphs on page 41 is repeated.

References

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