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:::::::{{re|DeCausa}} you've deleted the [[Lord Rhys]] article Prince of Wales infobox succession from [[Owain Gwynedd]] to [[Llywelyn the Great]], however, there is no consistency between artciles because the Owain and Llywelyn seperate articles still both list the Lord Rhys, aka Rhys ap Gruffudd as a successor and precessor as the Prince of Wales. [[User:Cltjames|Cltjames]] ([[User talk:Cltjames|talk]]) 17:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC) |
:::::::{{re|DeCausa}} you've deleted the [[Lord Rhys]] article Prince of Wales infobox succession from [[Owain Gwynedd]] to [[Llywelyn the Great]], however, there is no consistency between artciles because the Owain and Llywelyn seperate articles still both list the Lord Rhys, aka Rhys ap Gruffudd as a successor and precessor as the Prince of Wales. [[User:Cltjames|Cltjames]] ([[User talk:Cltjames|talk]]) 17:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::::{{re|Sirfurboy}} ok thanks for confirming the situation presented in these articles and creating consistency by labelling Llywelyn I as the first Prince. Guessing we're going with the English classification of the title and not the self proclamation of the Welsh Princes. [[User:Cltjames|Cltjames]] ([[User talk:Cltjames|talk]]) 18:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC) |
::::::::{{re|Sirfurboy}} ok thanks for confirming the situation presented in these articles and creating consistency by labelling Llywelyn I as the first Prince. Guessing we're going with the English classification of the title and not the self proclamation of the Welsh Princes. [[User:Cltjames|Cltjames]] ([[User talk:Cltjames|talk]]) 18:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::::::It is not an English classification, it is a historical one. Unless there are secondary sources that say otherwise of course. And not just any random secondary source, or else we would have to start with Bleddyn ap Cynfyn.[https://www.amazon.co.uk/First-Prince-Wales-Bleddyn-1063-75-ebook/dp/B01LZNDKA4/ref=sr_1_1?crid=1QEDT3T47WBWC&keywords=Bleddyn+ap+Cynfyn&qid=1699992327&sprefix=bleddyn+ap+cynfyn+%2Caps%2C68&sr=8-1] [[User:Sirfurboy|Sirfurboy🏄]] ([[User talk:Sirfurboy|talk]]) 20:06, 14 November 2023 (UTC) |
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The Lord Rhys
After conducting research, I've come to realise the section regarding the pre 1283 origins is missing Rhys ap Gruffudd as Prince of Wales from approximately 1171 until his death in 1197. Like Owain Gwynedd, he too was a descendant of Gruffudd ap Cynan, and like Gwynedd he too listed his title as Prince. Rhys was referred to as a Prince of Wales in Latin regarding grants to Abbeys in charters listed in Brut y tywysogion. Will someone add the proof ? Cltjames (talk) 16:36, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa: thoughts? Cltjames (talk) 13:49, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- Not sure why you pinged me. I don't think every random claim for someone being called "prince of Wales" is warranted to be included in this article. DeCausa (talk) 21:20, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa That's fine, I saw you were involved in the talk about the Prince of Wales before, and nobody else was commenting. As for every Prince, you might have a point, however, in the history books there is a cut off point of Kings of Wales prior and during to the Norman invasion, then Princes ever since. Like you've said, not every claim is warranted. But this so called list of pre 1283 'de jure' Princes could be expanded a little to include just a couple more names , similar to a previous edit showing a list of Welsh Princes in the article, and not only a paragraph or two. Does anyone else care to weigh in on the conversation about the Lord Rhys, or even Gruffudd ap Cynan as mentioned above as Template:Lang-la- Prince of Wales? The talk page here for Prince of Wales specifically mentions Gruffudd but no one else has bothered to comment anything. Besides, does anyone know the source listing him as Princepts ? The dilemma with these Princes is, the title could be misleading and have actually been deemed more on the line of Princes in Wales as part of their own Kingdoms with an other reigning monarch as King e.g. Prince of Gwynedd in Wales, son of the King. Like we see today in the monarchy, with say Prince Harry, yet not a Prince of a principality. Back to the question, Lord Rhys was acknowledged by the English crown as the Justiciar of South Wales, and effectively was the Prince of South Wales. Any more consenus about Lord Rhys as another potential Prince perhaps ? I believe the Prince list is simply a continuation of the King of the Britons or King of Wales lists, and only a few people should be added, that is the Lord Rhys & Gruffudd so Cynan as mentioned above... Unless there is more information that someone else would like to add? Cltjames (talk) 22:16, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- It seems pretty clear, that if Rhys ap Gruffudd called himself Prince of Wales in a 1184 charter, then we can't construe that he was Prince of Wales from 1171 until his death. We'd need some sort of authoritative source that makes this conclusion, not wishful thinking by a Wikipedian. Sionk (talk) 13:14, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- And then we might actually have a read of the sources before we get too excited. I note that Rhys ap Gruffudd refers us to Pryce (2005), which is here [1]. You can borrow it from there. It has quite a bit of discussion on the title, but says things like:
(page 97). I don't want to misrepresent the discussion that does make a case for his intentional use of the title, but we are not really speaking about the same thing as the ruler of a single principality, and neither are we looking at a settled understanding of the matter. I reverted some text out of the Rhys ap Gruffudd page yesterday. The text went beyond the source, and we might not be too surprised as to how it found its way into that article. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 14:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)Walliarum princeps may have referred to the wider hegemony within native Wales to which Rhys aspired.
- OK, just going on what I've read online, as I do not have a source that lists Lord Rhys as Prince, but a book noting him effectively as Prince of south of Wales. However, despite your recent edits, his infobox still lists him as Prince of Wales between 1171-1197 succeeding Owain Gwynedd. But this fact is not consistent between articles. Any ideas; do we change Lord Rhys or the Prince of Wales article? Cltjames (talk) 03:16, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa: you've deleted the Lord Rhys article Prince of Wales infobox succession from Owain Gwynedd to Llywelyn the Great, however, there is no consistency between artciles because the Owain and Llywelyn seperate articles still both list the Lord Rhys, aka Rhys ap Gruffudd as a successor and precessor as the Prince of Wales. Cltjames (talk) 17:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Sirfurboy: ok thanks for confirming the situation presented in these articles and creating consistency by labelling Llywelyn I as the first Prince. Guessing we're going with the English classification of the title and not the self proclamation of the Welsh Princes. Cltjames (talk) 18:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- It is not an English classification, it is a historical one. Unless there are secondary sources that say otherwise of course. And not just any random secondary source, or else we would have to start with Bleddyn ap Cynfyn.[2] Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 20:06, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Sirfurboy: ok thanks for confirming the situation presented in these articles and creating consistency by labelling Llywelyn I as the first Prince. Guessing we're going with the English classification of the title and not the self proclamation of the Welsh Princes. Cltjames (talk) 18:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa: you've deleted the Lord Rhys article Prince of Wales infobox succession from Owain Gwynedd to Llywelyn the Great, however, there is no consistency between artciles because the Owain and Llywelyn seperate articles still both list the Lord Rhys, aka Rhys ap Gruffudd as a successor and precessor as the Prince of Wales. Cltjames (talk) 17:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- OK, just going on what I've read online, as I do not have a source that lists Lord Rhys as Prince, but a book noting him effectively as Prince of south of Wales. However, despite your recent edits, his infobox still lists him as Prince of Wales between 1171-1197 succeeding Owain Gwynedd. But this fact is not consistent between articles. Any ideas; do we change Lord Rhys or the Prince of Wales article? Cltjames (talk) 03:16, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- It seems pretty clear, that if Rhys ap Gruffudd called himself Prince of Wales in a 1184 charter, then we can't construe that he was Prince of Wales from 1171 until his death. We'd need some sort of authoritative source that makes this conclusion, not wishful thinking by a Wikipedian. Sionk (talk) 13:14, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa That's fine, I saw you were involved in the talk about the Prince of Wales before, and nobody else was commenting. As for every Prince, you might have a point, however, in the history books there is a cut off point of Kings of Wales prior and during to the Norman invasion, then Princes ever since. Like you've said, not every claim is warranted. But this so called list of pre 1283 'de jure' Princes could be expanded a little to include just a couple more names , similar to a previous edit showing a list of Welsh Princes in the article, and not only a paragraph or two. Does anyone else care to weigh in on the conversation about the Lord Rhys, or even Gruffudd ap Cynan as mentioned above as Template:Lang-la- Prince of Wales? The talk page here for Prince of Wales specifically mentions Gruffudd but no one else has bothered to comment anything. Besides, does anyone know the source listing him as Princepts ? The dilemma with these Princes is, the title could be misleading and have actually been deemed more on the line of Princes in Wales as part of their own Kingdoms with an other reigning monarch as King e.g. Prince of Gwynedd in Wales, son of the King. Like we see today in the monarchy, with say Prince Harry, yet not a Prince of a principality. Back to the question, Lord Rhys was acknowledged by the English crown as the Justiciar of South Wales, and effectively was the Prince of South Wales. Any more consenus about Lord Rhys as another potential Prince perhaps ? I believe the Prince list is simply a continuation of the King of the Britons or King of Wales lists, and only a few people should be added, that is the Lord Rhys & Gruffudd so Cynan as mentioned above... Unless there is more information that someone else would like to add? Cltjames (talk) 22:16, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- Not sure why you pinged me. I don't think every random claim for someone being called "prince of Wales" is warranted to be included in this article. DeCausa (talk) 21:20, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
No list of native princes anywhere on Wikipedia
There doesn't seem to be a list of native Welsh princes anywhere on Wikipedia following the removal of the table from List of rulers in Wales.
Could an editor add this to an appropriate page please? Thanks Titus Gold (talk) 22:04, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- Here is the table:
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- Titus Gold (talk) 22:09, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- Leaving aside that there's dubious candidates on that list, the topic is fully covered in this article and also in Principality of Wales#The Pre-Conquest Principality. DeCausa (talk) 22:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- I appreciate your participation, but the same argument could be used to remove the English Princes of Wales table from this page, so that's not a fair assessment.
- Tagging some recent WikiProject Wales editors: @Sirfurboy @Sionk @Cltjames @DankJae - As I understand it, the main argument not to include the table of native princes here before was that they were already included in a table in List of rulers in Wales. Because that table has been removed from the "List of rulers in Wales" page, surely it now needs to be included here for balance?
- Thanks all. Titus Gold (talk) 22:42, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- The tabular form of the post-Conquest Princes of Wales is necessary because it covers 700 years and 23 individuals. There's no need need for a tabular format for the pre-conquest ones - it's a very small number over a small period (once the spurious ones you've included are removed) which is perfectly well covered by the existing text. DeCausa (talk) 23:04, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa I would disagree. There is the need for professionalism, and like Titus said, a table is the correct way to display the text. As for the Principality, you know my position on how the article is simply repeating Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw, and covers the period of 1216-1283, which is a technically not part of the Principality but the final stage of the Kingdom. And @Titus Gold: what he has written is legitimate and needs a place in Wikipedia. And personally I don't see the objections that could be valid, because the information is key to the era and should be promoted with a place on this platform. Cltjames (talk) 23:17, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- I simply don't understand what you're saying. As this article says there are generally recognised in some shape or form 4 pre-Conquest Princes of Wales; Llywelyn ab Iorwerth, Dafydd ap Llywelyn, Llywelyn ap Gruffudd, and Dafydd ap Gruffydd with an outside case for Owain Gwynedd. It just doesn't need to have a table. The argument that because the 23 "English" princes have a table so the 4 Welsh ones should as well is petty and pointless. DeCausa (talk) 23:26, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa Like I previously said about the Lord Rhys on this talk page, if the information is available, then it should be presented in it's entirety. There is no need to avoid the subject and dismiss a claim based on 1 person's personal preference. I will leave this a day or how long it takes for others to get involved. But to reiterate my position, I'm going on fact, and if the history books say Lord Rhys was a de facto Prince of Wales, then it should be listed. Also, the term native doesn't need to be apparent, they were in fact Celtic Princes, something the English Kings did not have a claim for. Therefore, a separate list can be created based on background of the Princes of Wales, firstly the Welsh Celts, secondly the English Anglo-Saxons. These are 2 different entities, just look at other Royal e.g. Marquess of Cholmondeley and Baron Newborough, 2 separate Barons of Newborough, but for those interested in reading the topic, there are 2 separate lists, this is an encyclopedia, not a personal webspace. Please allow the facts to be presented in full, this article is bigger than you are giving it credit for. Cltjames (talk) 23:37, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- We only put into articles the significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable (secondary) sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources.[3]. That doesn't mean we cram in everything we can dig up on the internet come what may. DeCausa (talk) 23:47, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa Like I said, you are underestimating the topic, i.e. Lord Rhys is listed on paper as a Prince of Wales, but somehow not online. A consensus raised by you Decausa will not change history. It will simply slow the process. Cltjames (talk) 00:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- While I am not a history person, and do not have a clear opinion on this. I vaguely remember past instances which gave excessive weight to the native ones, which shouldn't be repeated, and an increase in detail would require post-conquest also being expanded, as being the main use. But as the list has been wiped off from List of rulers in Wales (re-focused on regional leaders), I believe somewhere for them is needed, but it would need to be with due weight. Open to a List of princes of Wales list (de-capped), containing both pre/post-conquest, as tbh the table here is quite protruding, with this article focused on the title/history, like Monarchy of the United Kingdom and List of British monarchs.
- I am not an expert in whether some past claims to the title should be recognised, may be there should be a way to format the disputed claims of some? But if some reliable sources describe them as such then we should include them duly, but making a note other sources may dispute it, rather than conveniently ignoring it. Unless the claimant sources are clearly unreliable.
- The article may need a overhaul, although ideally from those with more experience in the topic than I. DankJae 01:26, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa Like I said, you are underestimating the topic, i.e. Lord Rhys is listed on paper as a Prince of Wales, but somehow not online. A consensus raised by you Decausa will not change history. It will simply slow the process. Cltjames (talk) 00:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- We only put into articles the significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable (secondary) sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources.[3]. That doesn't mean we cram in everything we can dig up on the internet come what may. DeCausa (talk) 23:47, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa Like I previously said about the Lord Rhys on this talk page, if the information is available, then it should be presented in it's entirety. There is no need to avoid the subject and dismiss a claim based on 1 person's personal preference. I will leave this a day or how long it takes for others to get involved. But to reiterate my position, I'm going on fact, and if the history books say Lord Rhys was a de facto Prince of Wales, then it should be listed. Also, the term native doesn't need to be apparent, they were in fact Celtic Princes, something the English Kings did not have a claim for. Therefore, a separate list can be created based on background of the Princes of Wales, firstly the Welsh Celts, secondly the English Anglo-Saxons. These are 2 different entities, just look at other Royal e.g. Marquess of Cholmondeley and Baron Newborough, 2 separate Barons of Newborough, but for those interested in reading the topic, there are 2 separate lists, this is an encyclopedia, not a personal webspace. Please allow the facts to be presented in full, this article is bigger than you are giving it credit for. Cltjames (talk) 23:37, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- I simply don't understand what you're saying. As this article says there are generally recognised in some shape or form 4 pre-Conquest Princes of Wales; Llywelyn ab Iorwerth, Dafydd ap Llywelyn, Llywelyn ap Gruffudd, and Dafydd ap Gruffydd with an outside case for Owain Gwynedd. It just doesn't need to have a table. The argument that because the 23 "English" princes have a table so the 4 Welsh ones should as well is petty and pointless. DeCausa (talk) 23:26, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa I would disagree. There is the need for professionalism, and like Titus said, a table is the correct way to display the text. As for the Principality, you know my position on how the article is simply repeating Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw, and covers the period of 1216-1283, which is a technically not part of the Principality but the final stage of the Kingdom. And @Titus Gold: what he has written is legitimate and needs a place in Wikipedia. And personally I don't see the objections that could be valid, because the information is key to the era and should be promoted with a place on this platform. Cltjames (talk) 23:17, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- Agree entirely with DeCausa: the status quo is just fine. The pre-Conquest princes are mentioned, with due weight, and putting them in a table would not add anything useful. Arguably, what is really missing from this article is a discussion of the post-Conquest history of the title and its holders, to balance out the pre-Conquest discussion. Rosbif73 (talk) 08:36, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Rosbif73 this is information would be better presented in the Principality of Wales article which is lacking relevance for its time period. Cltjames (talk) 13:13, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- The tabular form of the post-Conquest Princes of Wales is necessary because it covers 700 years and 23 individuals. There's no need need for a tabular format for the pre-conquest ones - it's a very small number over a small period (once the spurious ones you've included are removed) which is perfectly well covered by the existing text. DeCausa (talk) 23:04, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- Leaving aside that there's dubious candidates on that list, the topic is fully covered in this article and also in Principality of Wales#The Pre-Conquest Principality. DeCausa (talk) 22:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
- This table cannot be included in this form. Too many of the rows are uncited or marked as needing citations. I also think some of the columnns, such as the depictions and coats of arms, are unnecessary, intrusive and misleading because there are no contemporary images or coats of arms known. The table also appears to be original research by synthesis: there should be a single citation that lists all the princes of Wales. Problems also arise because some of the entries are disputed and not normally considered princes of Wales. Celia Homeford (talk) 08:37, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Celia Homeford the Brut y Tywysogion reference covers the most part of the entries. Then as for David II & III that would be easy to find citations. Then yes, there is a problem with Madog and Lawgoch who were not gavelkind male line primogeniture, which can be better explained instead of left blank. This is not original research, this is contemporary medieval documentation brought into modern times. Excluding the text only raises questions like this discussion. This isn't a consensus voting system, this is fact driven history. The topic has a definitive answer, the truth and the hope we can agree not to hide it. Cltjames (talk) 13:21, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- Appreciate @DeCausa 's point on how established some of the native princes were e.g Owain Lawgoch should have a note like "proclaimed in France". Agree that there could be more mention of later English/British princes that are only shown in the table.
- Agree with @DankJae that a list here is now needed since it has been removed completely from List of rulers in Wales. Some might argue that this is the more appropriate article for them anyway.
- Agree with @Cltjames that they all have appropriate dates etc. and are sourced from y e.g Brut y Tywysogion or other historical sources.
- Agree with @Celia Homeford that the table needs to be tidied up a little and consistency of showing where exactly the info is from with appropriate citations added.
- Agree with @Rosbif73 that there should be a little more said on the later English/British princes and how the role of the title changed e.g role on Welsh councils and any change in responsibility. Bear in mind that there are already lengthy paragraphs on the first English prince, insignia, titles, roles and investitures which haven't been discussed for the native princes, so arguably more should be said there on symbols used by the native princes.
- Potential conclusion based on input
- Re-add a table that is tidied and fully cited with coats of arms removed, cause of death shortened or removed and note for e.g Owain Lawgoch like "proclaimed in France". A majority of four editors seem in favour of this, if the table is tidied-up in a manner agreeable to @Celia Homeford. Hopefully, this is more agreeable to the two editors that were originally not in favour also.
- Separate matters
- Add English/British prince's responsibility change e.g any Welsh council with more mention of later English/British Princes and any role change - I'm happy for editors to go ahead and make well-thought additions here.
- Add a mention of any symbols used for native princes as Princes of Wales (can be discussed at another time).
- Hope that is a positive contribution. Thanks all. Titus Gold (talk) 17:11, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- There is absolutely no consensus for re-adding the table. DeCausa (talk) 17:24, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa personal opinion. I disagree, and would to suggest if this doesn't get through, then a new article needs to be created... List of legendary rulers of Wales... This could incorporate the Book of Baglan from 1000 BC through to Owain Lawgoch 1378 and Brut y Tywysogion. Also an issue raised in the talk for King of Wales article. And then it would bring Wales article on par with other Celtic King lists... List of legendary rulers of Cornwall, List of High Kings of Ireland, Legendary kings of Scotland. Cltjames (talk) 17:54, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- Indeed, I second the opinion that we have not reached any sort of consensus here. We've thrown a few ideas around, some good, some bad, nothing more... Rosbif73 (talk) 18:00, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- And to add, why are we talking about primary sources like Brut y Tywysogion and the Book of Baglan? What secondary sources list the Welsh princes in this way? Celia Homeford raises a valid concern about SYNTH and OR, which will only continue if we seek to pull together a bunch of primary sources to do something. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 18:38, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- I've since found two reliable secondary sources and I completely agree with Sirfurboy that the addition of secondary sources would be useful. I could adapt the table with the aforementioned suggestions for improvement made by other editors in my sandbox or a draft page and re-present a version at this talkpage at a later date? Titus Gold (talk) 01:47, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- You seem to have a new talk page tactic: say you agree with everyone then ignore the substance of what's being said as though everyone's said they agree with you (which they haven't). DeCausa (talk) 07:30, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Celia Homeford @Cltjames@DankJae@DeCausa@Rosbif73@Sirfurboy
- I've tried to take everyone's comments on board. Here is a provisional table following recommendations by Celia Homeford and Sirfurboy, including the inclusion of secondary sources. Thus far two of seven editors are not in favour of a table; so hopefully this improved version is more agreeable and I welcome further compromise.
- Note: There is a link above the English/British princes' table to the now-deleted native princes' table.
- (The following seem to be regarded as a Prince of Wales in function but did not personally use the title: Bleddyn ap Cynfyn, Gruffudd ap Cynan, and Llywelyn ap Iorwerth so I think that they should be mentioned in prose I think rather than in a table. The latter two are referred to as Prince of Wales in chronicles such as brut also. Llywelyn I in particular is regarded as an equivalent to Prince of Wales with chroniclers referring to him as such and having taxes paid to him by all other Welsh princes.)
- You seem to have a new talk page tactic: say you agree with everyone then ignore the substance of what's being said as though everyone's said they agree with you (which they haven't). DeCausa (talk) 07:30, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- I've since found two reliable secondary sources and I completely agree with Sirfurboy that the addition of secondary sources would be useful. I could adapt the table with the aforementioned suggestions for improvement made by other editors in my sandbox or a draft page and re-present a version at this talkpage at a later date? Titus Gold (talk) 01:47, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- And to add, why are we talking about primary sources like Brut y Tywysogion and the Book of Baglan? What secondary sources list the Welsh princes in this way? Celia Homeford raises a valid concern about SYNTH and OR, which will only continue if we seek to pull together a bunch of primary sources to do something. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 18:38, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- There is absolutely no consensus for re-adding the table. DeCausa (talk) 17:24, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Celia Homeford the Brut y Tywysogion reference covers the most part of the entries. Then as for David II & III that would be easy to find citations. Then yes, there is a problem with Madog and Lawgoch who were not gavelkind male line primogeniture, which can be better explained instead of left blank. This is not original research, this is contemporary medieval documentation brought into modern times. Excluding the text only raises questions like this discussion. This isn't a consensus voting system, this is fact driven history. The topic has a definitive answer, the truth and the hope we can agree not to hide it. Cltjames (talk) 13:21, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
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- Titus Gold (talk) 15:39, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- There is a bit of apples and oranges going on here. There are princes of Wales and princes of, well, Wales. But not all of Wales. Not Wales as a single polity, nor princes as rulers of that polity. This is a problem that is more easily unravelled in prose than in a list. But, when I spoke of secondary sourcing, I did not mean a history that states x was a prince of Wales (whatever that meant) but a secondary source that meets WP:LISTN:
If a historian had presented a list and said, "these are the pre-conquest holders of the title of Prince of Wales" then we would have something to work with.One accepted reason why a list topic is considered notable is if it has been discussed as a group or set by independent reliable sources.
- So what is wrong with this list? Well just to pick one example at random. Madog ap Llywelyn. Our wikipedia page says:
proclaimed "Prince of Wales"
with two in text citations. One is Schoolshistory.org! and that one does not mention this fact. The other is the dictionary of Welsh biography, which says,Madog placed himself at the head of the North Wales insurgents and claimed to be ' Prince of Wales.'
- Claimed to be. It doesn't actually say "proclaimed". Proclaimed by who? And this is certainly not the only case of shoddy use of sources to make a claim that is probably not recognised in any list of the kind proposed. Where did this problematic edit come from? Ah yes. [4] Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 18:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- That citation is on a different Wikipedia article not in this table! It's not relevant discussion for this table and would be better suited to that particular talk page. Please keep discussions fair and focused. Titus Gold (talk) 20:28, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- The table uses secondary sources for every prince, some of which also discuss title use in a grouped manner e.g The Acts of Welsh Rulers
- Other sources not included more obviously discuss in a grouped manner; "Sovereigns and Princes of Wales 844 – 1283"[5], The Welsh Princes The Native Rulers of Wales 1063-1282 [6].
- Hope that helps. Let me know if anything else is needed. Thanks Titus Gold (talk) 20:45, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- This is the problem. There are 2 sources cited: Davies and Carpenter. I can't access the particular page of Carpenter but Davies does indeed say that Madog assumed the title of PoW. But both the Davies and Carpenter are broad survey works that, though written by noted RS historians, will be summations - and in Davies that was only a passing reference without discusion of what it means. For example, there is no discussion of what recognition it was given. Here's what you find if you dig a little deeper: Prof. A.D. Carr in his Gentry of North Wales in the Later Middle Ages tackles the issue specifically:
the rising [i.e. Madog's] cannot be seen as a bid for the restoration of the native principality, although Madog did style himself prince of Wales in a grant of lands in Ardudwy and Rhos in 1294.
[7] That's enough to exclude Madog whatever Davies and Carpenter say. This is the trouble with cherry-picking passing references that do not discuss the recognition that was given to the supposed PoW. DeCausa (talk) 21:03, 9 November 2023 (UTC)- Here are some secondary sources Madog ap Llywelyn:
- Struggle For Mastery. If you type in e.g "Madog" you can see [8] page 513; "The rising of 1294-5 was more formidable. Edward had eliminated the main line of the Gwynedd dynasty, but there remained a sprig of the Meirionydd branch, Madog ap Llywelyn living on a small estate in Anglesey. In 1294 he proclaimed himself prince of Wales and led a revolt which drew on widespread resentments against the privileges of the new towns, the exactions of the sheriffs and the attempted levy (for the first time) of a general tax in Wales."
- Beverly Smith (seems to be considered an authority on the Princes)[9], page 583: "Madog ap Llywelyn assumed the style 'prince of Wales' when he rose in rebellion in 1294.4 A member of the princely lineage of Gwynedd, though not the illegitimate son of Llywelyn ap Gruffudd that an ..."
- Medieval Wales; "Madog ap Llywelyn , uses style Prince of Wales" page 155 [10]
- History of Wales by John Davies: Madog ap Llywelyn used "Prince of the Welsh"
- "Madog declared himself to be the lawful successor and assumed the royal titles of his predecessors including that of Prince of Wales (an example of which can be seen in the so-called Penmachno Document)" Jones, Craig Owen (2008). Compact History of Welsh Heroes: The Revolt of Madog ap Llywelyn. Gwalch. (Wikipedia quote as original source not accessible electronically)
- Based on secondary sources it seems clear that he did use the title. It's up for discussion how he is mentioned on the page; whether in this table or in prose. Titus Gold (talk) 17:31, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- But the point is, yes he did "use" it. But what Carr is telling us is that he used it once in a land grant in 1294. That's not enough. You're obsessed with raising every passing mention and every claim to mean that they are included in a tabulated list on a par, and with equal prominence, with holders that indisputably were Princes of Wales. That's WP:UNDUE. DeCausa (talk) 18:10, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- 5 other secondary sources have been provided saying he assumed the title and led a widespread rebellion. All the Princes listed are well documented users of the title but I assume the issue you have is only with Madog ap Llywelyn.
- If criteria for inclusion in a table is use of the Prince of Wales title then the list is appropriate and has been cited appropriately with reliable secondary sources. If you want to suggest a different criteria, you're welcome to do so.
- Think we now need to wait for third voices of opinion. Titus Gold (talk) 19:36, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- This isn't about criteria for your table. This is about why having your table, at all, makes no sense and is better covered by the existing text approach. It's only you that wants to bring back your table. DeCausa (talk) 20:28, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- I have reached out to a professional Wiki project, please see discussion: Wikipedia Wikipedia talk:WikiProject British Royalty#Celtic Princes of Wales. It's a shame we haven't been able to agree on much at all. I have reaffirmed my position and have given alternative ideas about creating a King list of 'legendary' rulers which have been ignored. Be it medieval or Iron Age rulers, the lists exist and should be published in articles similar to other Celtic nations and other monarchies around the world. Please contribute to the talk I have linked. This is the best way to find the correct solution to the dilemmas that have arisen. Cltjames (talk) 05:55, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- But the point is, yes he did "use" it. But what Carr is telling us is that he used it once in a land grant in 1294. That's not enough. You're obsessed with raising every passing mention and every claim to mean that they are included in a tabulated list on a par, and with equal prominence, with holders that indisputably were Princes of Wales. That's WP:UNDUE. DeCausa (talk) 18:10, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- Here are some secondary sources Madog ap Llywelyn:
- This is the problem. There are 2 sources cited: Davies and Carpenter. I can't access the particular page of Carpenter but Davies does indeed say that Madog assumed the title of PoW. But both the Davies and Carpenter are broad survey works that, though written by noted RS historians, will be summations - and in Davies that was only a passing reference without discusion of what it means. For example, there is no discussion of what recognition it was given. Here's what you find if you dig a little deeper: Prof. A.D. Carr in his Gentry of North Wales in the Later Middle Ages tackles the issue specifically:
- That citation is on a different Wikipedia article not in this table! It's not relevant discussion for this table and would be better suited to that particular talk page. Please keep discussions fair and focused. Titus Gold (talk) 20:28, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Titus Gold (talk) 15:39, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
Per WP:WEIGHT, this page is acceptable. The English/British heirs-apparent, are the more notable title holders. GoodDay (talk) 06:38, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- There seems to be little support for the inclusion of the table in this article. I tend towards oppose as well, and would prefer to see the table in its own article dealing with the Welsh princes. We have to understand that some sources are very remote and that, at the time of the Welsh princes, the territories we now recognise as the modern nation of Wales were in a state of flux, and some of these princes were princes in Wales rather than of Wales. I'm happy with the article as it is (though I don't see that the link to List of rulers in Wales is very helpful; it should be in See also...) Tony Holkham (Talk) 10:27, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- Going back a few comments, Carpenter merely says "In 1294 he proclaimed himself prince of Wales." Titus Gold produces other sources saying the same thing. He took the title Prince of Wales for himself. But then, so did Allan Evans [11]. And not to be facetious about this, but here is the problem. The extent to which you think that Madog ap Llywelyn was a prince of Wales will largely rest in your POV. Adhering to strict neutrality, DeCausa has already demonstrated, with sourcing, why he should not be in a table here. But perhaps there is room for a mention of his assumption of the claim, which is stronger than Allan Evans, primarily inasmuch as he had some people willing to kill people at his command. Any mention would need to have sufficient nuance that a reader can clearly discern the difference between a title and a claim to a title (especially a claim with no apparent attempt to rule the territory). I believe the native Welsh princes are best treated here in prose, not a table. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 11:10, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, the problem with the Welsh princes (with the possible exception of the latter Gwynedd princes, and then only really Llywelyn ap Gruffudd) is the patchy usage and the odd claim - which is very different to the well established list of the Plantagenets and later. They're not the same and text is the right way to discuss them. Otherwise, if Madog is to be included why not Bonnie Prince Charlie?[12] DeCausa (talk) 11:32, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- To be honest, I'm open to not having a table as long as all the Welsh princes in this table are at least mentioned in prose for which the table makes a useful reference. There should be at least some relevant images as well to brighten the section. In prose, there is opportunity to provide the context of the title use and how widely it was used/established.
- I've also said that the prose could be expanded for the English/British princes where there was a change to the role in responsibility.
- Does that sound fair? Titus Gold (talk) 00:25, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- The existing text already covers the princes in your table except Rhys, Madog and Owain Lawgoch. I've put a sentence in about Madog. I haven't added the other two. The source you've put in your table doesn't refer to anything about "Prince of Wales" in relation to Owain Lawgoch. The source you've put in for Rhys is WP:PRIMARY only. There's no room and would be in any case WP:UNDUE to include more images in this section. As far as I can see this now closes the issue. DeCausa (talk) 09:26, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- I've found a secondary source which references Rhy's use of the title in 2 documents - I've added that (in parentheses) into a new opening sentence which gives the context of the development of the title by the Gwynedd rulers. DeCausa (talk) 10:36, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, good. Im not too sure why that took over 3 weeks of debating to add the Lord Rhys, and even then it's in brackets. But I would like to bring up the question of a coat of arms again, specifically Llywelyn and the 4 lions. A flag that was later incorporated by the Prince of Wales, it would fit in well to the text with relevance to today.
- Yes, the problem with the Welsh princes (with the possible exception of the latter Gwynedd princes, and then only really Llywelyn ap Gruffudd) is the patchy usage and the odd claim - which is very different to the well established list of the Plantagenets and later. They're not the same and text is the right way to discuss them. Otherwise, if Madog is to be included why not Bonnie Prince Charlie?[12] DeCausa (talk) 11:32, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- Going back a few comments, Carpenter merely says "In 1294 he proclaimed himself prince of Wales." Titus Gold produces other sources saying the same thing. He took the title Prince of Wales for himself. But then, so did Allan Evans [11]. And not to be facetious about this, but here is the problem. The extent to which you think that Madog ap Llywelyn was a prince of Wales will largely rest in your POV. Adhering to strict neutrality, DeCausa has already demonstrated, with sourcing, why he should not be in a table here. But perhaps there is room for a mention of his assumption of the claim, which is stronger than Allan Evans, primarily inasmuch as he had some people willing to kill people at his command. Any mention would need to have sufficient nuance that a reader can clearly discern the difference between a title and a claim to a title (especially a claim with no apparent attempt to rule the territory). I believe the native Welsh princes are best treated here in prose, not a table. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 11:10, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
Cltjames (talk) 14:11, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- I wouldn't add it. Again, the 'native' princes of Wales aren't as notable as the English/British heirs-apparent. GoodDay (talk) 16:05, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- @GoodDay we've spoken about rewriting to article, and this is a perfect example to write a paragraph and explain the original coat of arms and it's use today through imagery. I'll leave it there for a broader consensus considering its a gap in the text that makes sense to add because it is one of very few pieces of history that can link the original native Celtic Princes and current day English Princes. Cltjames (talk) 16:22, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Glad to see we are coming to a reasonable compromise. With the following additions, I think the native princes section would a relatively fair overview;
- Reasoning behind Owain Gwynedd's decision to use the title, which was originally included. Since he was the first who was definitely known to use the title himself, this seems essential for the article to understand its origin.
- Lord Rhys and Owain Lawgoch mentioned, even if just half a sentence each giving context.
- I think it's also worth mentioning Glyndŵr's Senedd and perhaps a brief mention of international representation from Castille etc. because it reflects the recognition of the title. An optional addition is the offers of pardon to him because it could be a reflection of the relationship between the two traditions?
- (+ at least one image to brighten the section. A coat of arms or whatever is relevant) Titus Gold (talk) 17:10, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Using your numbering:
- I removed that because it's now covered by the first sentence: Owain Gwynedd's motivation was the same as all the Gwynedd princes. It wasn't specific to him.
- Rhys is mentioned already - Owain Lawgoch isn't because there's no source saying he used it.
- Unnecessary. There's a link to his article. And sounds like making a POV point via WP:SYNTH.
- Also mine was a WP:BOLD edit. Others may think that mentioning Madog and Rhys is undue and remove them. No room and no need (UNDUE) for arms/images etc. These people are footnotes to the central use of the itle over the last 800 years. DeCausa (talk) 17:19, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, could we just make the minor additions of:
- "princeps" as the latin term used in the Roman system said to have inspired the use by Owain Gwynedd. This is quite important for the page as a whole as it explains the origin of the term.
- I accept this mention of Rhys.There are secondary sources that mention the use of the title by Owain Lawgoch including: https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=7WquBwAAQBAJ&newbks=0&printsec=frontcover&pg=PT52&dq=owain+lawgoch+proclaimed+prince+of+wales&hl=en&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=owain%20lawgoch%20proclaimed%20prince%20of%20wales&f=false and also this secondary source: https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/The_Welsh_and_the_Medieval_World/geyVDwAAQBAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1&dq=owain+lawgoch+proclaimed+prince+of+wales&pg=PA242&printsec=frontcover (page 242) so I think mentioning him in passing in the same sentence as Madog ap Llywelyn would be appropriate.
- I accept this reasoning.
- I think one image depicting e.g Llywelyn's arms would be appropriate such as suggested above.
- Hope you agree that this is reasonable. Thanks Titus Gold (talk) 21:58, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- I don't think I have anything to change or add to what I previously said. DeCausa (talk) 22:25, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Titus Gold secondary sources for Lawgoch confirms his claim and alleviates the issue. It's odd to have a family of Princes and listing the self proclaimed individuals but missing one person from the bunch. I agree with Titus, Lawgoch needs a mention. Lawgoch was the final ruler of the line beginning with Owain Gwynedd and is listed on DWB as the lineal successor, he's referenced from multiple locations, this to me looks like a mistake in the article, not undue. I'm sure you know the saying; if you give to one, you have to give to all. Cltjames (talk) 02:03, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
if you give to one, you have to give to all
– No, Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information. We give due weight to things based largely on the weight that reliable secondary sources give them. If there are few or no RS stating that Lawgoch used the title, there's no good reason to mention him here. Rosbif73 (talk) 07:48, 13 November 2023 (UTC)- @Rosbif73 as far as I'm concerned Wikipedia's link to "OWAIN ap THOMAS ap RHODRI (' Owain Lawgoch '; died 1378), a soldier of fortune and pretender to the principality of Wales". Dictionary of Welsh Biography. National Library of Wales. is the MOST reliable source for Welsh royal history, the quotes speak for themselves and disprove any due weight issues... "very conscious of his hereditary claims as lineal successor of the two Llywelyns .... preceded by a notable proclamation setting out Owain's claims" the quote is undeniable and lists him alongside Llywelyn I & Llywelyn II. The text does not represent this fact and should explain his position, which is a necessary cog in the system. Cltjames (talk) 11:56, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- That source states that he issued a proclamation setting out his claims, sure, but I see no mention of what those claims actually were and whether they included any pretence to the title of prince of Wales. Rosbif73 (talk) 12:09, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Rosbif73 the potential sentences written about Lawgoch would be about closure, a sort of conclusion of the Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw. It brings together an explanation about the Llywelyns and their lineal successor, it fits in perfectly to the text and everyone knows that. Cltjames (talk) 12:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- We're not mind-readers! How about proposing some "potential sentences" to see whether there's consensus to add them? Rosbif73 (talk) 14:53, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- Ok good, thanks. It can be trimmed, or even extended with references, etc. Please feel free to suggest anything extra or less... But I feel he deserves more than one sentence, and a small paragraph gives readers a better explanation of the situation at the time after the Kingdom leading up to the Glyndwr rebellion during the Principality.
- In 1294, Madog ap Llywelyn led a rebellion against English rule in north Wales, during which there is evidence that he used the title "Prince of Wales" in one document.[18] Then less than a century later saw the end of the lineal succession of the House of Aberffraw, this time it was Owain Lawgoch (Template:Lang-fr, Owen of Wales) who was the final male hereditary claimant to the title of Prince of Gwynedd and potentially Prince of Wales. By 1372 Lawgoch was planning a coup d'etat in Wales against the English Crown, however, he was assassinated in 1378 by a Scotsman in France where he lived in exile as a mercenary in the service of Philip VI of France during the 100 years war.Dictionary of Welsh Biography. National Library of Wales https://biography.wales/article/{{{id}}}.
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(help) Cltjames (talk) 15:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)- Again, looking at the Claimants text, it so very vague. There is no mention of the Kingdom of Gwynedd, only Deheubarth, and it wasn't they're claim it was Gwynedd and the descent of Gruffudd ap Cynan who beat the Normans and his direct descendants claimed authority over Wales. Then the House of Aberffraw laid the claim to the title over other royal houses (Dinefwr- Deheubarth, Mathrafal- Powys). But yet neither Gwynedd nor Aberffraw is mentinoed, which is a mystery to me. There is potentially something missing and my Lawgoch paragraph can attempt to fill in some gaps. Cltjames (talk) 15:42, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- Even a quick glance shows several problems there:
- The cited reference makes no mention of the titles of Prince of Gwynnedd and Prince of Wales, nor of the House of Aberffraw, nor of the 100 years war, nor that he was the final hereditary claimant, nor that the expedition of 1372 was planned as a coup d'état – so any mention of all of these is WP:OR unless you intend to cite sources other than the DWB article (and even if you do, beware of WP:SYNTH).
- At the time of Lawgoch's assassination, he couldn't have been in the service of Philip VI, as Philip died in 1350!
- You haven't shown that this is WP:DUE.
- Rosbif73 (talk) 16:05, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- Like I said, if someone else is wanting to help out please... The text is missing a connection between the Kingdom of Gwynedd and their cadet branch of the House of Aberffraw to the Prince of Wales. @Titus Gold: Do you have any references to back up my paragraph? If not, I will rewrite and will talk again. Cltjames (talk) 16:08, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- We're not mind-readers! How about proposing some "potential sentences" to see whether there's consensus to add them? Rosbif73 (talk) 14:53, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Rosbif73 the potential sentences written about Lawgoch would be about closure, a sort of conclusion of the Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw. It brings together an explanation about the Llywelyns and their lineal successor, it fits in perfectly to the text and everyone knows that. Cltjames (talk) 12:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- That source states that he issued a proclamation setting out his claims, sure, but I see no mention of what those claims actually were and whether they included any pretence to the title of prince of Wales. Rosbif73 (talk) 12:09, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Rosbif73 as far as I'm concerned Wikipedia's link to "OWAIN ap THOMAS ap RHODRI (' Owain Lawgoch '; died 1378), a soldier of fortune and pretender to the principality of Wales". Dictionary of Welsh Biography. National Library of Wales. is the MOST reliable source for Welsh royal history, the quotes speak for themselves and disprove any due weight issues... "very conscious of his hereditary claims as lineal successor of the two Llywelyns .... preceded by a notable proclamation setting out Owain's claims" the quote is undeniable and lists him alongside Llywelyn I & Llywelyn II. The text does not represent this fact and should explain his position, which is a necessary cog in the system. Cltjames (talk) 11:56, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, could we just make the minor additions of:
- Using your numbering:
- Glad to see we are coming to a reasonable compromise. With the following additions, I think the native princes section would a relatively fair overview;
- @GoodDay we've spoken about rewriting to article, and this is a perfect example to write a paragraph and explain the original coat of arms and it's use today through imagery. I'll leave it there for a broader consensus considering its a gap in the text that makes sense to add because it is one of very few pieces of history that can link the original native Celtic Princes and current day English Princes. Cltjames (talk) 16:22, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, DWB reference paragraph simplified. But then I would look to move the Gwynedd and Aberffraw (there isn't a single mention about the royal house) context to another part of the origins section to better explain the situation.... A great nephew of Llywelyn II, Owain Lawgoch (Template:Lang-fr, Owen of Wales) whose hereditary claims was as the lineal successor and pretender to the Principality of Wales was as a soldier of fortune in the Kingdom of France. Lawgoch unsuccessfully attempted an expedition to Wales from France in 1372 after a proclamation for his claims, he was subsequently condemned as an enemy and traitor by the English Crown. Lawgoch was then assassinated in 1378 by a Scotsman in France. Cltjames (talk) 19:50, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- This is way over the top. Even if you could find a source that said he claimed the title, all that could be justified is a very short sentence, probably immediately after the sentence on Madog, that simply says that Owain Lawgoch also unsuccessfully claimed the title in the years X. That's it. Anything else gives far too much text to someone who wasn't prince of Wales. We don't need "closure, a sort of conclusion of the Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw". This is an encyclopedia article not a fanciful blog. DeCausa (talk) 20:53, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- These native princes additions that would bring a more complete overview to the section and would bring this particular discussion to a close from my perspective:
- Very brief mention of term "princeps" to explain origin.
- Very brief mention of Owain Lawgoch. "He was proclaimed Prince of Wales" source which mentions relation to both Llywelyns: https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=7WquBwAAQBAJ&newbks=0&printsec=frontcover&pg=PT52&dq=owain+lawgoch+proclaimed+prince+of+wales&hl=en&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=owain%20lawgoch%20proclaimed%20prince%20of%20wales&f=false
- A single image of Llywelyn or Glyndwr arms.
- I've already come a long way in compromising on no inclusion of a table or detail on some of the native princes. Don't think these three simple requests are asking for much. Titus Gold (talk) 23:18, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- 1. No brief mention is possible as the origin of the term as applied to the Welsh princes is much debated.
- 2. Rather than googling for the preferred phrase in Google books, it would be better if one chose a source based on the credentials of the author and then read what the author said about the subject. I know the author of that book, and he is able and knowledgeable, but also an archivist who mostly only publishes modern political history. That book is okay, but the relevant section is essentially just a sketch of Owain Lawgoch. Better sources should be possible. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 23:37, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- OK, I'll try that again, 1 sentence (2.5 to fit the relevant text)...
- The next to be proclaimed Prince of Wales was Owain Lawgoch in Montgomeryshire during 1363. As the lineal successor to the Llywelyn II of the House of Aberffraw, he lived in France as an exile from before 1365. Lawgoch was a soldier of fortune and had led an unsuccessful naval expedition to Wales in 1372, he was then assassinated in July 1378."OWAIN ap THOMAS ap RHODRI (' Owain Lawgoch '; died 1378), a soldier of fortune and pretender to the principality of Wales". Dictionary of Welsh Biography. National Library of Wales.John Graham Jones (17 October 2014). The History of Wales. ISBN 1783161698.
- I believe the House of Aberffraw needs a mention somewhere in the pre era. Otherwise the 1 sentence actually needs to be 2.5 to make sense. Potential drafting... "from before 1365"? Impossible to pin point the date he left for France, any ideas how to word that better? The rest makes perfect sense. Any thoughts? Please edit the sentence to your liking if needs be by using the references shown, otherwise, it should be posted to the article if consensus says it's acceptable... Cltjames (talk) 02:18, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- I have a thought: stop posting this. Multiple editors multiple times have told you the problems with this. DeCausa (talk) 07:23, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @DeCausa ok well it was the case highlighting 2 issues. One being a legitimate claimant, shame we haven't come to an agreement yet. @Sirfurboy: as for 1 source, there was nothing wrong with citing DWB, it's already used as a source for multiple Princes. Secondly there is a need to include a sentence about the House of Aberffraw. I will stop posting my draft because its ready for publication. Can I get a broader consensus please, or a simply a green light instead of an edit war. Lawgoch should be added, end of story. The article mentions 8/9 claimants, it's bizarre and looks like a mistake to leave one out. OK??? Cltjames (talk) 09:43, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- My reply was to Titus Gold. The source I was talking about was :
- Jones, John Graham. (2014) The history of Wales. Cardiff: University of Wales Press.
- Not that I have a real problem with either, but for record, if you search on the term you want to find and then cite the books that your search returns, you have assumed your conclusion in your premise, and unintended bias will be the result. The better way to find the sources is to select the best sources, read all that they say on the subject and then summarise.
- There is no good reason I can see at all for mention of the house of Aberffraw, because the native princes were not really dynastic. Again, you don't appear to be working forward from any secondary sources here. Rather, you appear to want to assert something about the Aberffraws and are working backwards to do so.
- As DeCausa has said, your draft is too long. The only thing that we can say about him was that he was a pretender to the title. We have a source for that (DWB) and it appears to me that such information is solid; but then, is it due?
- At this point there is clearly no consensus for your proposed text. You have a few options though:
- You could try for the barest mention of his being a pretender to the title;
- You could seek dispute resolution if you feel that the consensus here is stonewalling your progress (I don't think we are. I think we just don't agree. But that is an option); or
- You could open an RfC to get more eyes on this, but note this will take a month, and you will need to be careful how you open the RfC to ensure a neutral question that can be clearly answered.
- But really, I would suggest that DeCausa has already indicated where consensus is likely to rest on this. So option 4 would be to accept that this is not the right article for a long piece about a man who was not the prince of Wales, although he seems to have had ambitions to be so. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 10:13, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Sirfurboy ok thanks. 1 sentence:
- The next to proclaim himself was Owain Lawgoch who died in exile during July 1378 in the Kingdom of France.{{DWB Cltjames (talk) 10:33, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- To reiterate, the sentence is verified through DWB for this article. This is legitimately necessary for the completion of the section. 1 sentence can be created as demonstrated above. @DeCausa: I know you said drop it, but as per advice I've tried to amend the sentence. What about this new brief sentence now? Please answer the question and don't divert the issue, as one sentence will not do any harm to this article. Cltjames (talk) 10:36, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- My reply was to Titus Gold. The source I was talking about was :
- @DeCausa ok well it was the case highlighting 2 issues. One being a legitimate claimant, shame we haven't come to an agreement yet. @Sirfurboy: as for 1 source, there was nothing wrong with citing DWB, it's already used as a source for multiple Princes. Secondly there is a need to include a sentence about the House of Aberffraw. I will stop posting my draft because its ready for publication. Can I get a broader consensus please, or a simply a green light instead of an edit war. Lawgoch should be added, end of story. The article mentions 8/9 claimants, it's bizarre and looks like a mistake to leave one out. OK??? Cltjames (talk) 09:43, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- I have a thought: stop posting this. Multiple editors multiple times have told you the problems with this. DeCausa (talk) 07:23, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- These native princes additions that would bring a more complete overview to the section and would bring this particular discussion to a close from my perspective:
- This is way over the top. Even if you could find a source that said he claimed the title, all that could be justified is a very short sentence, probably immediately after the sentence on Madog, that simply says that Owain Lawgoch also unsuccessfully claimed the title in the years X. That's it. Anything else gives far too much text to someone who wasn't prince of Wales. We don't need "closure, a sort of conclusion of the Kingdom of Gwynedd and House of Aberffraw". This is an encyclopedia article not a fanciful blog. DeCausa (talk) 20:53, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- The source isn't supporting the text. See separate post below. DeCausa (talk) 11:44, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- R.R. Davies in his The Age of Conquest: Wales 1063-1415 (p.436) does say "It was as 'prince of Wales', not of Gwynedd or Powys or Deheubarth, that both Owain Lawgoch and Owain Glyn Dŵr put forward their claims". That does put Owain Lawgoch in a context with Glyndŵr. Lawgoch on the following 2 pages is positioned as a harbinger of the much more serious revolt of Glyndŵr I would therefore make this suggestion (which also deals with Madog). Convert the first sentence under the sub-section 'Post-conquest claimants' (which I added on Madog two days ago) into a footnote (use of the title once in the Penmachno Document warrants no more) and replace with this:
Then continue as currently. The Madog footnote could be added at the end of the first sentence. DeCausa (talk) 11:44, 14 November 2023 (UTC)In the fourteenth century, two pretenders to the title of 'prince of Wales' attempted to make good their claims: Owain Lawgoch, a descendant of the princes of Gwynedd, and Owain Glyndŵr, whose ancestors included the former rulers of Powys and Deheubarth. The former's abortive attempt at invading Wales in 1372 was followed by Glyndŵr's much more serious revolt beginning in 1400.[1] Supporters of Glyndŵr proclaimed him "Prince of Wales" on 16 September 1400...
References
- ^ Davies, R. R. (2000). The Age of Conquest: Wales 1063-1415. Oxford University Press. pp. 436–438. ISBN 978-0198208785.
- Sure, that makes sense. Only maybe not in the fourteenth century; maybe... In the mid to late fourteenth and early fifteenth centuries, two... Cltjames (talk) 12:05, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
Article or section slanted
Just getting the ball rolling here. It seems the article has been tagged as being slanted towards recent events. So, how do we solve this problem? I would like to once more suggest a coat of arms section, this would be perfect to connect the native (Celtic) Princes to the modern day Prince by explaining the use of Llywelyn's banner of Aberffraw. Any other ideas? Cltjames (talk) 20:24, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- The English/British heirs-apparent are the most notable individuals, concerning holders of the title 'prince of Wales'. That's what this page should & is presenting. GoodDay (talk) 08:01, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @GoodDay the {Recentism|} banner is highlighting that section, correct. The section mentions: first Prince MOS:QUOTATIONS; titles and roles missed 600 years; Insignia could add various coat of arms and badge again missing key information regarding transition of 600 years; then 1911-1969-2022. So immediately the section seems to be covering the 14th and 20th centuries & 21st briefly, however, the 15th to 19th centuries are practically missing. In terms of consensus, what do users think that should be added ? Cltjames (talk) 09:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Cltjames, The banner was added in this edit under the § Heirs apparent to the English or British thrones section by @RadioactiveBoulevardier, with the summary
tag for recentism (e.g. zero discussion of 1911 investiture at which the future Edward VIII spoke in Welsh)
. Although the section seems to have the 1911 investiture, was this recently added? Unless they're arguing for more detail and possibly earlier investitures? So nothing to do with native-born princes nor expanding details of such, which per the discussion above seems no clear consensus for. DankJae 11:04, 14 November 2023 (UTC)- OK, I see. So, technically the banner can be removed... However, I think I've raised a fair point in suggesting a missing link between mentions in the 15th to 19th centuries, except a quote from 1607 which is out of place and can technically be moved to the origins section. Then under titles and roles, a {see also|Honours of the Principality of Wales or link can be added. Also, the insignia section can be greatly expanded to include the numerous successive coats of arms used by the Prince of Wales as there is no mention of the 8 different arms that evolved, Coat of arms of the Prince of Wales#English/British Heir Apparent. Like you said @DankJae:, the article may need an overhaul, and I have found some weaknesses that can be strengthened for now. Cltjames (talk) 11:21, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Cltjames, The banner was added in this edit under the § Heirs apparent to the English or British thrones section by @RadioactiveBoulevardier, with the summary
- @GoodDay the {Recentism|} banner is highlighting that section, correct. The section mentions: first Prince MOS:QUOTATIONS; titles and roles missed 600 years; Insignia could add various coat of arms and badge again missing key information regarding transition of 600 years; then 1911-1969-2022. So immediately the section seems to be covering the 14th and 20th centuries & 21st briefly, however, the 15th to 19th centuries are practically missing. In terms of consensus, what do users think that should be added ? Cltjames (talk) 09:54, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
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