User contributions for 200.120.211.223

27 September 2014

• 15:5515:55, 27 September 2014 diff hist 0 User talk:200.120.211.223 No edit summary
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• 12:5712:57, 27 September 2014 diff hist −55 Victor Borge rm peacock words
• 12:5612:56, 27 September 2014 diff hist −28 Templo Mayor misuse of footnote
• 12:5612:56, 27 September 2014 diff hist −219 Formula One tyres →History: obvious, no need to say it
• 12:5412:54, 27 September 2014 diff hist +4 The League of Gentlemen →Film: desperately cheesy. almost useless as a section as well, needs some actual useful details
• 12:5312:53, 27 September 2014 diff hist −65 Giancarlo Fisichella poor writing improved
• 12:5312:53, 27 September 2014 diff hist 0 Jordan Grand Prix No edit summary
• 12:5112:51, 27 September 2014 diff hist −68 Jordan Grand Prix it was never known as Eddie Jordan Racing, and there is no need to include trivial variants of the name either.
• 12:4912:49, 27 September 2014 diff hist −236 Gerhard Berger rm hyperbole and nonsensical claim that it was good that he wasn't wearing a seatbelt
• 12:4712:47, 27 September 2014 diff hist +4 Gerhard Berger not unique, all the manufacturers who ever scored a single win had drivers who got their first and last win
• 12:4512:45, 27 September 2014 diff hist −154 Shell shock we use our own words. lifting chunks of text verbatim from sources like this is not acceptable
• 12:4512:45, 27 September 2014 diff hist −11 Mika Häkkinen →2000: grammar, rm peacock words
• 12:4512:45, 27 September 2014 diff hist −521 Shellshock these two red links do not merit an article and therefore do not merit inclusion here
• 12:4012:40, 27 September 2014 diff hist −1 N-ray →Significance
• 12:4012:40, 27 September 2014 diff hist −470 N-ray →Significance: rm nonsense. you can't make an obviously highly tentative claim and present it as if it is fact. also rm pov
• 12:3612:36, 27 September 2014 diff hist −393 Mechanical pencil pointless interruption of sentence, unnecessary brackets removed, no such "popular" belief exists and the policy of a particular exam is not of encyclopaedic value in this article
• 12:3312:33, 27 September 2014 diff hist −1,849 Mark Blundell →'Blundellisms': entirely unencyclopaedic in tone and content. take it to a fansite, it's not appropriate here
• 12:3212:32, 27 September 2014 diff hist −46 Remote and isolated community poor writing improved, unnecessary formatting removed
• 12:2712:27, 27 September 2014 diff hist −1,054 Salt Pit improved writing, and removed a section that seems to be purely advertising with no real notability
• 12:2012:20, 27 September 2014 diff hist +1 Death of Abdul Wali no previous mention of any flashlight, and a word was missing
• 12:1812:18, 27 September 2014 diff hist −32 Riz Ahmed →Television and film: nothing coincidental about his detention at Luton airport. also rm pov and improved tone
• 12:1012:10, 27 September 2014 diff hist −54 PageRank →False or spoofed PageRank: linking a specific term to a general article which does not mention the term is not appropriate
• 12:0812:08, 27 September 2014 diff hist −435 PageRank →Deprecation: putting a citation mid-clause as well as at the end of the sentence is really pointless; neutral tone is required; and a change of a URL three years ago is not interesting or useful to report on
• 12:0512:05, 27 September 2014 diff hist −158 Nofollow →Concept and specification: authors intentions are not of encyclopaedic value
• 12:0312:03, 27 September 2014 diff hist −10 Nofollow →Introduction and support: rm pointless verbosity, corrected tenses, and clarification is required
• 12:0112:01, 27 September 2014 diff hist −6 Darwin Mounds describes? no, is.
• 12:0012:00, 27 September 2014 diff hist −73 Berwick-upon-Tweed unsourced and unnecessary quote removed
• 11:5911:59, 27 September 2014 diff hist −752 Coldstream rm pov, spam, and a closed golf club is hardly worth mentioning
• 11:5611:56, 27 September 2014 diff hist −35 Sick Heart River →Plot summary: rm pov
• 11:4711:47, 27 September 2014 diff hist −329 History of the European Cup and UEFA Champions League →2003 and 2004 – All-Italian final and Porto's second title: rm peacock words, cheesy writing, pov
• 11:4211:42, 27 September 2014 diff hist −437 History of the European Cup and UEFA Champions League →2000 to 2002 – Real Madrid new dominance: rm peacock words, cheesy writing, unlikely claims and hyperbole
• 11:3311:33, 27 September 2014 diff hist −23 Jan Magnussen →Major series racing: totally unnecessary