Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Intrinsic rewards and motivation

Heading casing

Hi Zwyndham. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:56, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted User name removed from the page. Authorship is as per the page's edit history. 2. Headings Under-developed, mostly 1-level heading structure – develop further, perhaps using a 2-level structure for larger section(s) Basic alignment between between sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings. Aim to improve. Remove acronyms Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings No need to cover extrinsic rewards (except in passing) or compare with intrinsic. This is not the focus of the topic. Be disciplined. 3. Overview Basic Add an image to the scenario to help attract reader interest Add a brief, evocative description of the problem/topic Use serial commas[1]. Video (1 min) Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended 4. Key points Basic development of key points Good use of citations Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples Use APA style 7th edition for citations (e.g., do not include author initials) Consider using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression such as checking grammatical and spelling errors Conclusion is underway What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure One or more relevant figure(s) presented and captioned The figure caption(s) could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text (e.g., topic is IR) Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style (e.g., see Figure 1) 6. Learning feature Add in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2) Basic use of scenario/example/case study Consider including one or more quiz question(s) about the take-home messages Promising use of one or more table(s) 7. References Good Well done on identifying relevant systematic reviews and/or meta-analyses Check and correct APA referencing style: capitalisation provide dois; if not available, use the shortest possible URLs page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-); remove spaces around the dash 8. Resources See also Good Identify more specific, relevant links Use sentence casing (fixed) External links Very good Use sentence casing Use alphabetical order 9. User page Good Description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 10. Social contribution One out of three types of contributions made with with direct link(s) to evidence. The other types of contribution are making: comments on the talk pages of other chapters (past or current) posts about the unit or project on other platforms such as the UCLearn discussion forum or on X using the #emot24 Review quality of edits: For this edit, use a numbered list as demonstrated in Tutorial 2. This edit replaced one mispelling with another mispelling

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:41, 2 September 2024 (UTC)