User contributions for Jimblackler

3 July 2024

• 12:1712:17, 3 July 2024 diff hist −143‎ GameStop short squeeze ‎ Merging the two sections about the same event

30 January 2023

• 00:4300:43, 30 January 2023 diff hist −10‎ That's Life! ‎ →‎Music on That's Life!: remove editorialising.

19 January 2023

• 19:2419:24, 19 January 2023 diff hist +545‎ Kumail Nanjiani ‎ More details of his lead role in a Hulu miniseries.

24 August 2022

• 14:3014:30, 24 August 2022 diff hist +638‎ Supersingular isogeny key exchange ‎No edit summary

16 June 2022

• 08:1008:10, 16 June 2022 diff hist +2‎ Minder (TV series) ‎ →‎Storylines: Meaning fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 April 2022

• 15:0815:08, 3 April 2022 diff hist +117‎ Hollywood in Vienna ‎ →‎Max Steiner Film Music Achievement Award

4 February 2022

• 17:5317:53, 4 February 2022 diff hist −92‎ Hollywood in Vienna ‎ Removed out of date section.

9 July 2021

• 21:2921:29, 9 July 2021 diff hist −127‎ The Office (British TV series) ‎ →‎Legacy: Deleting this because I'm not sure it was true in Gervais' case.
• 21:1421:14, 9 July 2021 diff hist +611‎ The Office (British TV series) ‎ Created Legacy section and moved Gervais 2021 comments to this section where it fits better than in Production.
• 09:4409:44, 9 July 2021 diff hist +1,498‎ The Office (British TV series) ‎ I was surprised to see there was no Production section about the origins of this iconic and highly influential show.

10 June 2021

• 13:5913:59, 10 June 2021 diff hist −19‎ James Earl Jones ‎ Removing repeated (actually contradicting) section.

1 May 2021

• 10:3710:37, 1 May 2021 diff hist −54‎ Marriage ‎ Copy edit for brevity.

25 April 2021

• 16:3216:32, 25 April 2021 diff hist +6‎ Smile (data interchange format) ‎No edit summary

16 April 2021

• 14:0814:08, 16 April 2021 diff hist −27‎ James Earl Jones ‎ Copy edit for brevity.

15 April 2021

• 10:1410:14, 15 April 2021 diff hist −133‎ Marriage ‎ When the lead repeats itself it is normally a bad sign. The removed sentence is pretty much covered in the opening paragraph.

9 March 2021

• 22:1322:13, 9 March 2021 diff hist +205‎ Talk:Graham Linehan ‎ →‎What in the name is "anti-trans activism"?

20 February 2021

• 22:3722:37, 20 February 2021 diff hist −1‎ Hollywood in Vienna ‎ →‎Overview
• 22:3322:33, 20 February 2021 diff hist +38‎ Cocaine ‎ Added an important detail to the lead about what the substance actually is.

21 January 2021

• 23:3423:34, 21 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ Mississippi Grind ‎ →‎Plot

19 January 2021

• 00:0800:08, 19 January 2021 diff hist +5‎ Hollywood in Vienna ‎No edit summary

18 January 2021

• 23:5723:57, 18 January 2021 diff hist −37‎ Rosa Parks ‎ Lead is now a good length per WP:LEADLENGTH.

14 January 2021

• 17:4517:45, 14 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Marriage ‎ Grouped sentences about civil marriages.
• 17:3317:33, 14 January 2021 diff hist −53‎ Waitrose ‎ Remove repetition.

5 January 2021

• 19:3219:32, 5 January 2021 diff hist −51‎ Subway (restaurant) ‎ Baseless claim. Undid revision 996044957 by 2600:1700:2230:9E50:4163:EAA1:F97:17F0 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 01:2001:20, 5 January 2021 diff hist +37‎ Eastern Bloc ‎ Undid revision 997987401 by 2001:EE0:41C1:3D0C:E9F5:70E:E860:F365 (talk) Tag: Undo

3 January 2021

• 00:4100:41, 3 January 2021 diff hist +37‎ Eastern Bloc ‎ A complex topic does not justify violating MOS:LEADLENGTH. Tag: Reverted

31 December 2020

• 18:3618:36, 31 December 2020 diff hist +69‎ Waitrose ‎ Added some fun interest to the lead.
• 07:2107:21, 31 December 2020 diff hist +1‎ Star Citizen ‎ →‎Crytek lawsuit Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 December 2020

• 01:0201:02, 23 December 2020 diff hist +37‎ Yemen ‎No edit summary
• 00:2600:26, 23 December 2020 diff hist −1,089‎ Volkswagen ‎ An advertising slogan wouldn't normally make the lead unless it was particularly noteworthy. Also, the deleted sentence isn't particularly clear ("referencing the name's meaning"??)
• 00:2200:22, 23 December 2020 diff hist +31‎ César Awards ‎No edit summary
• 00:1900:19, 23 December 2020 diff hist −48‎ Nudity in film ‎ Brevity edit. The phrase 'contemporary norms' covers it.
• 00:1600:16, 23 December 2020 diff hist −22‎ Black Friday (shopping) ‎ Brevity edit.
• 00:1500:15, 23 December 2020 diff hist −321‎ Lily Collins ‎ Nominations aren't leadworthy. Even award wins may not be unless they prove the subject's notability.
• 00:1300:13, 23 December 2020 diff hist −184‎ Lily Collins ‎ Contributions towards fixing {{lead too long}}. Accolades for a specific role (one of many) aren't leadworthy. I moved the references into the body.
• 00:0900:09, 23 December 2020 diff hist −234‎ Lily Collins ‎ Contribution to {{lead too long}}. Details of the subject's higher education and some work experience roles aren't really leadworthy.
• 00:0500:05, 23 December 2020 diff hist +37‎ Electronic music ‎ WP:LEADLENGTH

22 December 2020

• 23:5523:55, 22 December 2020 diff hist +32‎ Waitrose ‎ Added essential history details to the lead.
• 23:4823:48, 22 December 2020 diff hist −22‎ Waitrose ‎ I found the Mark Price assertion to be confusing, so I clarified what it was intended to imply. I think this is nonetheless probably not leadworthy though.
• 19:1119:11, 22 December 2020 diff hist +15‎ Patrice O'Neal ‎ →‎Career: Fix editing error. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 December 2020

• 01:0301:03, 21 December 2020 diff hist −42‎ Marriage ‎ Edit for brevity.
• 00:5100:51, 21 December 2020 diff hist +37‎ Klotz Digital ‎ Details of interest into lead.

20 December 2020

• 16:4516:45, 20 December 2020 diff hist −106‎ Marriage ‎ WP:PLEASEDISCUSS
• 16:4216:42, 20 December 2020 diff hist −66‎ Marriage ‎ Removing a tangental detail that - although true - does not earn its place in the lead which is still over-long.
• 16:3816:38, 20 December 2020 diff hist −30‎ Marriage ‎ Brevity edit. I think the meaning is the same without the removed section.

19 December 2020

• 17:5817:58, 19 December 2020 diff hist −125‎ Marriage ‎ Merged the two sections that both concerned women's rights.
• 17:5317:53, 19 December 2020 diff hist −14‎ Rosa Parks ‎ Small edit for brevity.
• 17:3217:32, 19 December 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Steven Spielberg ‎ Small copy edit.
• 17:2717:27, 19 December 2020 diff hist +29‎ Fats Waller ‎ Editing unencyclopedic language.
• 17:2417:24, 19 December 2020 diff hist −57‎ Speed limit ‎ Brevity edit. The name of the report doesn't really need to be stated; what is important for the lead is who made the claim. The name of the report can be found in the citation linked.