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A user with 1,197 edits. Account created on 27 April 2015.
8 November 2024
- 00:1100:11, 8 November 2024 diff hist −2 Alien (film) Restored to last edit by JJMC89 bot III. Rv unnecessary 'toying with' edits. Existing text was better. Tag: Manual revert
7 November 2024
- 21:1221:12, 7 November 2024 diff hist −71 The Breakfast Club →Plot: Removed excessive detail. And he was not put in detention for trying to kill himself, only for bringing a flare gun into school. current
30 October 2024
- 21:1321:13, 30 October 2024 diff hist +222 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 21:0221:02, 30 October 2024 diff hist +69 Zilog Z80 Clarification of new registers over 8080 (main registers, alternate registers, index registers). current
- 20:5320:53, 30 October 2024 diff hist +147 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers: Reply Tag: Reply
- 19:3419:34, 30 October 2024 diff hist +2,046 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers
- 16:5416:54, 30 October 2024 diff hist +274 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers: Reply Tag: Reply
- 16:1116:11, 30 October 2024 diff hist −98 Rosa Klebb →Reception: Deleted the misleading 'whom Fleming's himself characterized in the novel as "the oldest and ugliest whore in the world",'. Fleming did not characterise her as such. Instead, he described her as such when a Klebb chose to dress up and apply an excess of make-up after drinking. She didn't typically do so, nor does Fleming typically describe her as such in the novel. current
- 15:5915:59, 30 October 2024 diff hist +809 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers
27 October 2024
- 02:0302:03, 27 October 2024 diff hist −16 Galaksija (computer) →Design: Correction: wire links, not jumpers. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
25 October 2024
- 13:3813:38, 25 October 2024 diff hist +1,400 Talk:Zilog Z80 →Doesn't have fourteen registers: new section Tag: New topic
14 October 2024
- 14:4814:48, 14 October 2024 diff hist −225 Sinclair QL →Design: Removed untrue and technically meaningless statement. The 68008 and 8049 are independently clocked (see QL service manual). current
- 14:4714:47, 14 October 2024 diff hist +20 Sinclair QL →Design: Simplified and reordered clumsy sentences.
- 13:0613:06, 14 October 2024 diff hist +6 Sinclair QL →Reception: Clarified it's Clive Sinclair being quoted, inamongst all the 'Sinclair' references which mean the company.
8 October 2024
- 09:1809:18, 8 October 2024 diff hist −35 Tracy Bond Undid revision 1250002933 by 2605:8D80:680:6544:198:89AC:CA6D:B255 (talk) Rv good faith edit. Vesper does not marry Bond, only Tracy does. current Tag: Undo
2 October 2024
- 16:5016:50, 2 October 2024 diff hist +1,017 Talk:ZX81 →Malcolm Evans quote current
1 October 2024
- 20:1420:14, 1 October 2024 diff hist +671 Talk:ZX81 →Malcolm Evans quote
- 18:2818:28, 1 October 2024 diff hist +775 Talk:ZX81 →Malcolm Evans quote
- 18:1118:11, 1 October 2024 diff hist +1,440 Talk:ZX81 →Malcolm Evans quote
- 09:3909:39, 1 October 2024 diff hist −75 Hi-de-Hi! →Cast: Unnecessary narrative in summaries.
30 September 2024
- 23:0423:04, 30 September 2024 diff hist +489 Talk:ZX81 →Malcolm Evans quote: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
- 22:3522:35, 30 September 2024 diff hist −656 ZX81 Undid revision 1248687979 by Ylee (talk) Removed unsubstantiated quote. Is only from a source, not a reliable source, which does not justify it's inclusion. Do not edit war by reverting. Instead, discuss proposed change on the article's Talk page before further editing on this. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
29 September 2024
- 20:4120:41, 29 September 2024 diff hist −83 John Virgo 'Generation Game' not notable. Lots of people guested on it. current Tag: Manual revert
- 20:3920:39, 29 September 2024 diff hist +444 Talk:Victoria Beckham →Is this serious?: Reply Tag: Reply
24 September 2024
- 11:4011:40, 24 September 2024 diff hist −16 Acorn MOS →Credits: Removed spaces that aren't in ROM.
18 September 2024
- 10:3310:33, 18 September 2024 diff hist −2 Life thru a Lens Undid revision 1246330433 by 200.68.169.193 (talk) Revoked apparent vandalism. Tag: Undo
15 September 2024
- 11:1311:13, 15 September 2024 diff hist +14 Licence to Kill Undid revision 1245825552 by Masato.harada (talk) Reverted incorrect change. British English is used to observe how US audiences got mixed up with a driver's licence. It's not a quote of American speech/text, it's a description, so it's BrEng. Tag: Undo
12 September 2024
- 20:0120:01, 12 September 2024 diff hist +136 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 19:2419:24, 12 September 2024 diff hist +351 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply Tag: Reply
- 18:3318:33, 12 September 2024 diff hist +949 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:2617:26, 12 September 2024 diff hist +15 m User talk:Popcornfud →Edits on Alien
- 17:2517:25, 12 September 2024 diff hist +3 User talk:Popcornfud →Edits on Alien
- 17:2417:24, 12 September 2024 diff hist +536 User talk:Popcornfud →Edits on Alien: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:2017:20, 12 September 2024 diff hist +123 Alien (film) Reinstated revision before Popcornfud changes. Existing text was better. A lot of editing got the article to where it is. Chopping out detail to make it terse makes it worse, not better. Changes did read as rewritten just to the editor's preference. Weaver is not a star, she was an unknown. Tag: Manual revert
- 11:2911:29, 12 September 2024 diff hist +170 ZX Interface 2 →Joystick ports: Split up awkward sentence into two. Clarification instead of using 'mapped'. Instruction, not command.
11 September 2024
- 17:4117:41, 11 September 2024 diff hist +427 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply Tag: Reply
- 12:2212:22, 11 September 2024 diff hist +336 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:4907:49, 11 September 2024 diff hist +3 Licence to Kill →Plot: Clarified who 'him' is.
- 07:0907:09, 11 September 2024 diff hist +630 Talk:Alien (film) →Revert: Reply Tag: Reply
10 September 2024
- 22:0722:07, 10 September 2024 diff hist +220 Alien (film) Undid revision 1245073743 by Popcornfud (talk) Existing text was better. This was just a rewrite for preference, not improvement. Tag: Undo
- 14:2414:24, 10 September 2024 diff hist +2 A Momentary Lapse of Reason Better English: 'Two' at start of sentence, not '2'.
5 September 2024
- 14:1514:15, 5 September 2024 diff hist 0 Ringo Starr →Personal life: Fixed broken flow: moved Bach sentence into Bach paragraph, was a stray sentence in the grandchildren paragraph.
- 11:1511:15, 5 September 2024 diff hist −95 Berlin Trilogy Restructured awkward sentence. Trilogy didn't have one release, it's three albums. Removed Consequence Of Sound quote, already in 'Reception' section.
3 September 2024
- 11:1311:13, 3 September 2024 diff hist −20 Peter Gabriel (1978 album) Rephrased clumsy sentences. Article on British artist uses British English.
31 August 2024
- 14:1014:10, 31 August 2024 diff hist +1 Alien (film) Undid revision 1243246666 by Kielitieteilijä (talk) Tracking devices do not kill. Existing text was clear and unambiguous. Tag: Undo
29 August 2024
- 14:3214:32, 29 August 2024 diff hist −15 Sting (musician) Undid revision 1242907123 by 80.192.231.72 (talk) Restored correct text. Not a professional-only name. ("[My wife] Trudy calls me Sting," he told Time in 2011. "I was never called Gordon. You could shout Gordon in the street and I would just move out of your way.") Tag: Undo
- 12:5312:53, 29 August 2024 diff hist −4 Lennon–McCartney →Joint credit: Quote was changed to be incorrect. Restored original quote.
28 August 2024
- 22:5922:59, 28 August 2024 diff hist −12 Licence to Kill Undid revision 1242799958 by Masato.harada (talk) Reinstated edit. It's a spy film, far more than an action thriller. The latter was only a recent and unsuitable edit. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 20:2020:20, 28 August 2024 diff hist +9 Spy film Audience does not 'hate' the villains, they're not full of hatred for screen characters. Rephrased.
27 August 2024
- 10:5110:51, 27 August 2024 diff hist −19 Alien (film) →Plot: 'set out' can mean 'make a plan', restored 'head out'. No ambushing (lying in wait in a concealed position) happens, removed. Bodies are not seen to be taken either, removed.
