User contributions for TonyCH64

10 September 2024

• 00:2600:26, 10 September 2024 diff hist +38‎ m .travel ‎ Corrected an egregious grammatical error where the verb did not match its subject in person. Also corrected nomenclature as to the sector/industry. current Tag: Visual edit

16 December 2023

• 03:4903:49, 16 December 2023 diff hist −14‎ Geodesy ‎ Corrected an imprecise, verbose construct.
• 03:4203:42, 16 December 2023 diff hist −19‎ m Geodesy ‎ Removed an imprecise, verbose redundancy

22 March 2022

• 23:0023:00, 22 March 2022 diff hist +95‎ m Broughton Island (New South Wales) ‎ Clarified the alleged timeframe and agency as to who was living there, and removed the intimation that somehow an ancient name could have been recorded when there was no means of recording it.

7 December 2021

• 22:3022:30, 7 December 2021 diff hist −3‎ m Keep the Aspidistra Flying ‎ Deleted unnecessary dangling preposition from the introductory statement.

24 October 2021

• 00:3700:37, 24 October 2021 diff hist +205‎ m The Cult ‎ Corrected the misinterpretation of singular and plural, especially in the hidden comments. Tag: Reverted

2 February 2021

• 22:2122:21, 2 February 2021 diff hist +3‎ Gadigal ‎ →‎European history: The reference to the “Gadigal Wangal peoples website” was about the website which “belongs” to both the G. people and the W. people, so the punctuation now reflects this. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:1622:16, 2 February 2021 diff hist +4‎ Gadigal ‎ →‎European history: The previous usage of “invasion” instead of the historically accurate “colonisation” is not warranted as it is both political & mendacious. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 January 2021

• 16:3616:36, 21 January 2021 diff hist +239‎ Clive Shakespeare ‎ →‎Death: As a local in the area (Newtown) where Clive was living in the very late 20th Century and early 21st Century, I was fortunate enough to know him as a friend or acquaintance or drinking buddy then. So I know for a fact that he was diagnosed with the prostate cancer around 2003 or thereabouts. Must we put such a fine point upon it? I remember for example that his wife at the time, Elizabeth asked the Dr. if he'd still be able to perform on "the work bench." The answer? "Yes," happilly!

2 November 2020

• 12:2712:27, 2 November 2020 diff hist +10‎ m Vivarium (film) ‎ Corrected a grammatical error where the singular verb did not agree with the plural subject.

19 October 2020

• 20:3520:35, 19 October 2020 diff hist +9‎ m James Clerk Maxwell ‎ Slight adjustment to the grammar of one opening phrase
• 20:3220:32, 19 October 2020 diff hist +55‎ m History of Maxwell's equations ‎ Applying corrections to poor grammar and punctuation, in order to streamline the text for greater concision. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

8 October 2020

• 00:1400:14, 8 October 2020 diff hist +42‎ Timothy Leary ‎ →‎Personal life: There are three children noted in the list of his marriages, but the intoductory statement only said that he’d fathered two children. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 October 2020

• 19:5719:57, 1 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Decolonization of the Americas ‎ →‎Undermining of metropolitan authority: -- Corrected the spelling of 'defense' to the international standard, cf. https://www.lexico.com/definition/defence Tag: Visual edit

13 September 2020

• 09:4709:47, 13 September 2020 diff hist −17‎ m Vice (2018 film) ‎ Deleted the description "Comedy-drama" which indeed was the hyperlink to the Wikipedia article itself on "Comedy-drama" which in turn in itself is importantly flagged with "This section has multiple issues." -It is a fallacious move by a malicious party to belittle this film with such a slur as "Comedy-drama" when Wikipedia itself for example questions that description as having "multiple issues." That slur ought not be let stand when the film otherwise is based on fact moreover such observation Tag: Visual edit

1 August 2020

• 15:3315:33, 1 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Cultural evolution ‎ The claim was asserted that a man understood, when rather he perceived. -The word "perceived" has replaced the word "understood," therefore. Tag: Visual edit
• 15:2915:29, 1 August 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Cultural evolution ‎ Incorrect mood used for the verb "to be" in the past tense, "If there was;" -Changed to the correct subjunctive mood, "if there were" Tag: Visual edit
• 15:2315:23, 1 August 2020 diff hist +16‎ m Jean-Baptiste Lamarck ‎ There was a moot claim asserted without any citation or source to support it, so I have added the words "which allegedly" in order to indicate the baseless nature of the statement. Tag: Visual edit
• 15:1615:16, 1 August 2020 diff hist +10‎ m Jean-Baptiste Lamarck ‎ A claim without any source cited to back it was made, so I have inserted the word "allegedly" in order to indicate the moot nature of said claim. Tag: Visual edit

24 June 2020

• 00:3500:35, 24 June 2020 diff hist +952‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Songs ‎ →‎How to join the discussion? And where is that list?: new section

20 June 2020

• 04:0004:00, 20 June 2020 diff hist +15‎ m The Snow Goose (novella) ‎ Adjusted "then" to "after which" for a better indication of the timing. Adjusted the date format to an international standard appropriate to the story's content. Tag: Visual edit

17 June 2020

• 12:2512:25, 17 June 2020 diff hist −7‎ m Viking Age ‎ →‎Historical considerations: Such considerations are indeed the context. Tag: Visual edit

16 June 2020

• 21:5221:52, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m All round defence ‎ Corrected spelling for internal consistency, within the article itself, of the international standard "defence" from the confused & confusing US standard. Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4621:46, 16 June 2020 diff hist +11‎ m Infantry tactics ‎ →‎Ancient history: Adjust spelling of the word 'metre' to its international standard instead of the confused & confusing US standard. -Replace the misplaced & unexplained acronym 'TO&E' with the contextually much-more appropriate word 'weaponry.' Tag: Visual edit

24 May 2020

• 12:4612:46, 24 May 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Talk:The Chronicles of Narnia (film series) ‎ →‎sloppy: -- So awfully sloppy that the subject & verb agreement was wrong.
• 12:4112:41, 24 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Talk:The Chronicles of Narnia (film series) ‎ Corrected the sloppy grammar, which was so sloppy that its tense was totally incorrect.

21 May 2020

• 23:2523:25, 21 May 2020 diff hist +359‎ N User talk:TonyCH64 ‎ This is the start of a page called User talk:TonyCH64

2 May 2020

• 15:1415:14, 2 May 2020 diff hist +7‎ m Wikipedia:Vital articles/Level/5/History ‎ Adjusted the initial wording to maintain grammatical consistency there.

26 January 2020

• 22:3222:32, 26 January 2020 diff hist +8‎ Mystery Road (TV series) ‎ Adjusted mismatched tense in the paragraph, etc. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 January 2020

• 00:2800:28, 13 January 2020 diff hist +213‎ m Nominal number ‎ Reworded the introduction to remove excessive and confusing verbosity there. Tag: Visual edit

2 January 2020

• 00:4100:41, 2 January 2020 diff hist +821‎ m Julian Assange ‎ Added sufficient detail to clarify the events mentioned in the previous copy. Tags: possible BLP issue or vandalism Visual edit

5 November 2019

• 08:0608:06, 5 November 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Pet Sematary (2019 film) ‎ →‎Reception: -- slight grammatical fix under 'Critical response' Tag: Visual edit
• 08:0108:01, 5 November 2019 diff hist +323‎ m Pet Sematary (2019 film) ‎ Under the section "Critical response" the information regarding review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes has been updated to include the additional audience members' survey results. Tag: Visual edit
• 05:3705:37, 5 November 2019 diff hist +477‎ m Pet Sematary (1989 film) ‎ Here under the 'Reception' section, more complete reporting on the ratings reviewed by the Rotten Tomatoes aggregator web-site Tag: Visual edit

27 October 2019

• 20:3220:32, 27 October 2019 diff hist +34‎ m American Civil War ‎ This was a couple of minor changes in order to correct grammatical errors. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4901:49, 27 October 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Lincoln (film) ‎ One indentation inserted, as the first paragraph, especially with all of its hyperlinks was too challenging to the reader, not merely this reader, too. Tag: Visual edit

30 September 2019

• 12:4012:40, 30 September 2019 diff hist +15‎ m List of narrative techniques ‎ →‎Style: Previously it said "A symbolic fiction story," where the word 'fiction' should be in its adjectival form for the noun 'story,' i.e. it should have said "A symbolic, fictional story" -- nonetheless, to provide even greater clarity, the reworded phrase is now "Symbolic fiction as presented in a story" Tag: Visual edit

29 July 2019

• 06:0806:08, 29 July 2019 diff hist +17‎ m Day Tripper ‎ Added an important emphasis as to the temporal information that the song was in the set-list for about a year only, before the band retired from live performances. Tag: Visual edit
• 06:0106:01, 29 July 2019 diff hist +34‎ m Day Tripper ‎ Opening statements which apparently required citations are justified later in the body of the article; -This has now been noted there with a parenthetic comment. Tag: Visual edit

22 July 2019

• 22:1422:14, 22 July 2019 diff hist +269‎ N User:TonyCH64 ‎ Here I have created a very brief description of myself in my capacity as an occasional editor of the Wikipædian articles’ content. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 January 2019

• 00:1400:14, 2 January 2019 diff hist +14‎ Edgar Allan Poe ‎ Fixed misleading reference to the “emerging genre” of sci.fi! Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 July 2018

• 00:5700:57, 16 July 2018 diff hist +376‎ m Australian Aid ‎ It appears that this article was once an article about AusAID, which was retitled moreover with just a few introductory changes. Thus the introductory sentence is now updated to make it clear that Australian Aid has superceded AusAID, and that therefore AusAID no longer exists as such, with a few appropriate tweaks to reflect this.

9 May 2018

• 11:2011:20, 9 May 2018 diff hist +19‎ m Public holidays in Vanuatu ‎ →‎Public holidays: The public holiday for the 10th of May was not listed in the table. I have attempted to add it in here now.

15 April 2018

• 03:1803:18, 15 April 2018 diff hist +21‎ m List of James Bond films ‎ It is PROFOUNDLY important to keep in mind at all times that Bond is a FICTIONAL character. Hence the highlight of the word "fictional" in the introductory sentence, moreover the insertion of the word "supposed" into the subsequent sentence which describes the fictional character. The point here is that FICTIONAL characters are not real, and we ought NEVER talk about them as though they were, even as we must acknowledge that the FICTION which exists about such characters certainly exists.

16 February 2018

• 22:4922:49, 16 February 2018 diff hist +7‎ m Futureworld ‎ In the opening paragraph of the description, the pronoun 'none' had been incorrectly treated as a plural, which made the sentence confusing, especially where "original writer-direct Crichton" was such a word sandwich immediately after that false lead."

10 February 2018

• 22:4522:45, 10 February 2018 diff hist +1‎ m Alcatraz Dining Hall ‎ →‎In popular culture: The photograph's caption had incorrect grammar which has now been corrected so that subject and verb agree.

9 November 2016

• 00:1500:15, 9 November 2016 diff hist −109‎ m Hubert Reeves ‎ →‎Quotes: Contentious material .. that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately. "Unquote!"

22 February 2016

• 15:2615:26, 22 February 2016 diff hist +41‎ m On Giants' Shoulders ‎ →‎External links: The apparently long-since dead link -- http://www.simonsingh.com/On_Giants_Shoulders.html/ -- for Simon Singh's book review is updated now.

26 January 2016

• 21:5121:51, 26 January 2016 diff hist +273‎ m Be My Wife ‎ The tense of the opening paragraph was confused. Also, various allegations throughout are now indicated as such. Tag: Visual edit

31 December 2015

• 09:2609:26, 31 December 2015 diff hist +58‎ m Honi soit qui mal y pense ‎ Adding a more linguistically idiomatic translation in the first paragraph for what the motto really means. Tag: Visual edit