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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 04:13, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:13, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Philadelphia Flyers

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  • I think you can expand on his impact as a rookie beyond the team (see [1])
  • He was kind of in the race for the Calder [2], earning 3 votes [3].
  • I imagine the "kid line" is because of their youth but I think it can be explained a bit. Maybe alongside young forwards Brayden Schenn and Jakub Voráček

Toronto Maple Leafs

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Second stint with Philadelphia

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Couple more things

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  • The sentence about the "kid line" is kind of a run-on. As well, you should take out which because it doesn't make sense with the sentence.
    •  Fixed How does it look now?
  • Can you please add a hyphen in hat trick to bypass the redirect?
    •  Done
  • For the Athletic sources that are hidden behind a paywall, please follow Template:Closed access
    •  Done Used "url-access=subscription", as recommended by the template
  • Why do you need two different sources (one in the body and one in the chart) for the Hockey East All-Rookie Team? Can you not use the same one?
    •  Fixed
  • Can you please change Calder Trophy to Calder Memorial Trophy to bypass the redirect?
    •  Fixed
  • Please WL the first mention of The Morning Call in work
    •  Done
GhostRiver, this should do it . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
HickoryOughtShirt?4 All done! Thanks for taking look at such a large article! — GhostRiver 00:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
GhostRiver, the longer it is, the more fun it is! I am passing this, well done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:15, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]