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Assess : -Consider rewording article to adhere more to standards of Neutral Point of View and Verifiability. Many sentences read as though "Lilith" existed and previous cultures have aspects that relate back to "her" rather than that the concept of Lilith arose during the middle ages and may have been inspired by previous cultures. There are multiple places in this article and related articles that also mention Lilith and present "facts" which are then immediately contradicted by sentences after. The whole article is mildly schizophrenic, stating facts then contradicting them.
Cleanup : -Shorten and remove least notable uses of Lilith in popular culture section.
Copyedit : -Patai and Hurwitz have two sources and it's confused which source is being called upon in the notes. For example, no note should read Hurwitz p. xx but instead read Hurwitz (1980) p.xx or Huritz (1992) p.xx
-There are missing page numbers from many sources.
-This article is using the NOTES - REFERENCES style of annotation so the <ref name="NAME"/> inline notations for sources with multiple pages listed in the Reference section is not used and need to be edited to a <ref>Author (DATE) p. xx</ref> style.
-Check on capitalization and individualism throughout. If it is a common demon lilitu then it's lower case if it's the Lilith it's upper case. In each usage what are we talking about? Is it THE Ki-sikil-lil-la-ke? Is it Lilu or lilu? Is it ever Lilitu or should it alwasy be lilitu? Is it Ardat-lil or is there ardat-lil's? There is consistency in Hurwitz's book but not across sources.
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 February 2019 and 8 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Patricia.alexander.
@Ogress Hi, clarifying here because of typo in edit summary. Biblical Hebrew does distinguish length in hireq. Generally a long hireq is indicated by hireq-yodh such as both hireqs in לִי-לִי-ת. While this is not itself an absolute principle, we can confirm the hireqs' status by other rules. 1) A word-final and stressed hireq like the second syllable is always long. 2) A short hireq necessitates a dagesh hazaq in a following lamed; as the second lamed is rafe, the first hireq must also be long. GordonGlottal (talk) 18:41, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@GordonGlottal hmmmm while inherent length does appear in ɔː iː eː [a macron, i macron, e macron), at least if we agree on a system akin to geoffrey khan's work, it is extremely difficult to determine in the case of iː. i defer to you here but i think it might be overspecifying? nonetheless you are technically correct, and as hermes notes, that's the best kind of correct.
also forgive the lack of caps for some reason recently when i use the shift when commenting on someone's page, it sends me to the beginning of the section and so i haven't bothered copypasting except for the question mark above and the following sig marker Ogress23:29, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It is difficult to approach academically, although not all cases are equally challenging. In general advice, there's often no need to go to any trouble. Distinguishing hireq is still a practical question for revivalists in the Orthodox Jewish world, and people like Joshua Jacobson and Jeremy Wieder have created practical systems for the novice cantillator. Wieder has also recorded himself reading every liturgical passage with distinct vowel-lengths. There's room to quibble, and daylight between wiki's aims and those of religious revivalists, but these systems and recordings are a great resource if you want quick, practical tools, or to check a particular pronunciation (Isaiah 34 is never read liturgically so not available here specifically). GordonGlottal (talk) 03:17, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am coming back late because of conflict with another editor, but I do wish someone would take Tiberian recitation seriously! Also, as an Iraqi learner, the lack of begadkefa(ra)t pronunciations is somewhat frustrating, as we pronounce all of those (some people are weak on the b~v contrast, but in general it is observed). Ogress16:03, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]