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Improvement needed to lede

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The phrasing and content in the second sentence of this article's lede comes across as promotional rather than educational. Recommend replacing the rental data with a summary of the historic content. (The rental data, if deemed necessary, may then be moved to the body of the article.) Also recommend that more citations be added (different from/in addition to those currently present). Otherwise, nicely done! 47thPennVols (talk) 22:30, 17 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]