Talk:Tampines MRT station
Notes for improving this page
[change source]These notes are for the page creator. They are to help him improve this article.
To begin, I'll just comment on the first sentence:
- "The station, Tampines MRT Station (EW2/DT32) was an interchange station along East West MRT Line and the future Downtown MRT Line which is currently under construction."
Comments:
- The sentence should start with the name of the station, not with "The station".
- It says that this station was a station along the two named lines. That means that it used to be a station, but is not a station any more. The enwiki article says that it is still a station. Which is it?
- This sentence is pretty long for simple English. It should be divided into two or three sentences.
- There should be the word the before "East West MRT Line".
Work on those and let me know when you want more input. --Auntof6 (talk) 06:04, 6 May 2016 (UTC)